Review of chapter "Scene of an Imperfect Crime" from Gideon
Review:
Well war was always the most likely result as soon as Leah decided to go after Buffy. At least Charles and Anna seem content to wait for now. I hope they consider what the council would have to gain from attacking Bran's mate, ie - nothing. If they were going to plan to kill a wolf they should have picked someone else and covered it up much better. This would have been just stupid. Hopefully they don't think the council is stupid.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scene of an Imperfect Crime" from Grevane
Review:
Fecal matter meets cyclical airflow modification device. Hoo boy, this is going to be tricky.
At least Anna is asking the right questions, lots of authors would have hit the pack with the idiot ball and let the battle begin. Good on you for giving them some brains, keep up the great writing!