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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Labrid
Review:
interesting story any chance of it continuing in the near future? (less than a year)
Review By [Labrid] • Date [26 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from KrisB
Review:
I've read this a couple of times. I love reading your stuff. The only thing that I thought was off was the Dawn possessiveness and Willow suddenly letting him go as well. That all felt far to forced.

Willow can have both Buffy and Xander. I always like the Dawn with Xander after a Halloween thing. She is usually just mature enough for him.

I actually think that Xander and Harmony would be a very good a strong pairing if they did indulge each other. The making it where they don't mesh feels far to forced. I actually think that Xander and Harmony are the only ones that could really tire each other out during sex.

I liked the Power Rangers thing. I vote for the girls having a Sailor Scout theme as well. They could just dress up as the Scouts around the house it would work.

I'm actually disappointed that they aren't really making use of their powers to really fix up and improve their home. Xander comic book guy should have lots of ideas what they could do. Why don't they build an underground base and try making things that last there as well? Just because energy constructs disappear doesn't mean that they couldn't make a machine or robot with the energy contructs that makes things that doesn't require their active thought to support it.

I would also love for them to try casting a group warding thing that uses their various colors as a defense against any that would try to enter the property.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from MagnusXXN
Review:
Missed the new chapter! Glad your continuing this. Way to bury the Xander/Harmony smut. Sure, I like X/D as much as the next guy. But there teenagers living together with weird emotional powers and require closeness. Orgies should be a rule, and odd pairings every few days.

So I'm still waiting on a good X/H scene, followed by some X/B, and X/C stuff.

Good update, can't wait to read more so hurry back.


): )
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [21 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Vassago
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So, essentially, Xander/Dawn, Buffy/Willow, and Oz/Every Other Female In The Group.

I don't think I've seen that last pairing before.

Amuses me, yes, but it's unusual.
Review By [Vassago] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Dragonelf
Review:
Using Power Ranger inspired costumes is definitely a good idea.

I hope we will see more chapters soon.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Shepard's Pie::

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a book is the fire itself.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vassago
Review:
"I've been crushing on him since I got here."

If that's Dawn's logic, then Willow should be the one with dibs. :P

I like the idea, though I'm curious if the Justice League will also be brought into this instead of just Green Lanterns.
Review By [Vassago] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
I was not expecting to like this, but it turned out to be very good.

I like the way you handled the tie in with the Guardians this has been a very good fic so far, I will defiantly be tracking this!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Ringmaster
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I think this is the third time or so I've read this story, and I've enjoyed it every time. Damn good work, as always.
Review By [Ringmaster] • Date [2 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Cdog
Review:
Angel, Jessie, and Merrick are the only ones that I can think of as candidates for Black Lanterns.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from TheGuru
Review:
Made me laugh out loud to the point that my face hurt. That's pretty rare. Quick question: If Spike is dead and Angel's gone, where's Dru?
Review By [TheGuru] • Date [20 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
The Coach was funny and I loved the group playing dress up. Nice to see
a different ending to the Ford affair. Too bad we didn't get to see
Xander at work in the DMV. The only thing I didn't like was the whole
Harmony and Xander's energies don't mesh bit. Feels like heavy handed
positioning for the chosen pairings.

Overall great chapter!

Reply: Than Buffy couldn't be with any of them and you'd get overlap from the others too which we haven't seen.
Comments from author:
Red and Orange tend to overlap a bit. I figure a feedback loop between the two could happen.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Shadowman
Review:
This is a little different and odd but interesting, looking forward to more soon.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Greywizard
Review:
Liked this.

Having Ford's situation turn out differently was a nice change, and I like the way the various Scooby characters' behaviors are subtly (usually) displaying their emotional spectrum connection.

I also like the way that Buffy can see the truth of a situation, as someone else has pointed out.

Definitely enjoying this story. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [10 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from CageFire
Review:
This is a pretty good story. The whole sex thing is kind of gratuitous even when you don't go into detail but I guess it's okay. I don't much care for stories with cheap sex, where they treat sex as a plaything. Oh well though, I'm not going to stop reading over it or anything. As long as you don't focus on it so much that you forget the rest of the plot as I've seen some authors do before.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [10 Apr 12] • Not Rated
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