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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Zyanadryn

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like where you are going with this!

Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from VillageOrchid

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Err. The third person where you can occasionally dip into one character or another's thought process, but mostly sticking with the main character. Is that "limited"? You could still have diary entries on occasion, by saying she wrote.... or she looked at her recent entry on ....

Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze

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Imperius: I fully expect to meet you at the Pearly Gates, little thief, and don't you dare disappoint me.
Phillipe: I'll meet you there, Father... even if I have to pick the lock.

Looks like the Key's going for it. (quotes from the closing moments of *Ladyhawke*)

Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Gideon

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hmm, I think I actually prefer the first person, which is a surprise to me. As long as it is not all told through a diary :) I don't recognize any of the people in the story yet but I hope something interesting will happen soon?

Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]

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