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Review of chapter "chapter 3" from twlight
Review:
I love this wonderful story so far. I love that Faith saw the spirit guides, the fact that the wolf wanted a belly rub is just to cute. I do hope that both real life and the muse for this story allow you to update this wonderful story again soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for such a nice review. I will try to update this one again as soon as possible, but I can't really make any promises as to when. It was supposed to be a short story, but is trying to turn into another epic. My muse does that to me a LOT. LOL
Review By [twlight] • Date [13 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from jakedaman
Review:
I like it so far! Faith is still Faith only more mature.
Comments from author:
Thank you, that's what I was going for. As soon as I can recreate my missing notes and go through what I might still have, I'll start posting on this one again. Thing is, I'm about to start my summer schedule and that will be BUSY! Mixed blessing. :)
Review By [jakedaman] • Date [1 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from loretta
Review:
this is interesting
Comments from author:
*chuckle* This is getting repetitive. ;) I'm glad you think so and I'll do my best to write more on it one day. *g*
Review By [loretta] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from dreameralways
Review:
Interesting premise for a story. I look forward to seeing how you develop it.
Comments from author:
Thanks and thank you for taking the time to review. So sorry I took so long to reply, but I do plan to continue this story someday, when I can rewrite everything I lost in the computer crash. *rueful smile*
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [20 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
I have to wonder - what happened to Hope... ?

Interesting start though - will be interested to see more
Comments from author:
*applauds* You win the prize! Yeah, don't really know what THAT will be, but you certainly guess it, there WAS a Hope. Now, part of this fic OR if I turn 'em into short stories, the next one, will be to discover what happened to Hope, because Janeane WAS going in a predictable line with those names.

Well done and thanks for the review! *g*
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Some good moments in this.
Comments from author:
Thank you and thanks for the review. :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yay! Faith meets Jim and Blair AND her little sister, and so far things are going well.

Faith's maturity is very well done -- she's still undeniably Faith, but she's learned a lot and is a much better place.

Plus, I do love it when Jim goes 'Blessed Protector' on a scuzz-ball (and when Blair does his intellectual, empathetic 'shaman' thing).
Comments from author:
So far, so good. I hope you keep liking it. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from tosca
Review:
Interesting story - I'm really enjoying it. :-)
Comments from author:
I'm glad. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Review By [tosca] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from AllenPitt
Review:
Yikes. Makes me wonder if there are any other siblings out there. Faith could turn out to have a twin (if you ever want to crossover with Dollhouse or Tru Calling...)
Anyway-- Charity is now going to find out Faith has had an interesting life. -Presumably Faith's criminal records have been wiped by Willow? Because I doubt child protective services would be happy if they found out about it...
Comments from author:
No, I will not be crossing this with either of those shows. If I did, it would be Tru Calling. Sorry.

Guess I'll have to make it be a magic thing. I thought a pardon from a high up government official. Or... The Watcher's Council had lots of strings that could be pulled, so maybe they pulled 'em. Yeah, I think I'll go with that one. Thanks for helping me get that loose end tied up. *g*
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Greywizard
Review:
This one looks like it could be very interesting.

Usually, Sentinel crosses involve Jim being Xander's father, so it's nice to see Faith being the central character in this one.

Write more when you can, we'll be here waiting. ;-)
Comments from author:
*g* Thanks. I'll do my best. Like I've said before, the chapters are probably gonna be short, but I've got 6 of them and am working on 7. If I can leave #6 alone long enough, that is. LOL
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [14 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from tosca
Review:
Interesting start! :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I hope I hold your interest with the rest of it. *g*
Review By [tosca] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from LMiC
Review:
LOL. I like. :)
Comments from author:
*vbg* I'm glad. The offer still stands to give you spoilers. Best friend status and all that has to earn you something. *chuckle*
Review By [LMiC] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Allyssiandra
Review:
Nice update. Only one complaint/request....too short!....Please post more soon. I look forward to seeing Faith's run in with Jim and Blair. As well as finding her sister.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Well, a short update is better than no update, right? The chapter lengths will fluctuate, but will mostly be short. Probably. *chuckle*

I'm going to TRY and stick with a once a week posting on this one, for as long as I'm ahead on chapters, which I am right now. *g*
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ora
Review:
Hm, I'm very interested in seeing where this goes. Do we know the sister? I love sentinel but nobody seems to write it anymore.
Comments from author:
*g* Well, I know where it goes, it's getting there that can be a hassle. At least I'm trying to stay several chapters ahead on this one. I've got up through 6 (and part of 7) ready for the beta, all told.

Um, no, the sister is a total OC, but don't worry, Jim and Blair will figure prominently in this fic.

I know, isn't it awful? So this is my humble contribution, but there are still some people writing in a couple of places. Or at least, they WERE. Where all have you gone to read?
Review By [ora] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Terrific! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, now, so please update soon-ish? Pretty please?
Comments from author:
I'm trying to stay ahead of this one and will also try to update once a week. The good news is, I have six chapters for sure and am playing with chapter 7 right now. :)

I also really need to get in contact with my beta, every time I start to, I get distracted. LOL
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
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