Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Okay, nicely bizarre! :)
Review By [RevDorothyL
] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TAO
Okay...that's just messed up.
Funny...but seriously messed up.
Review By [TAO
] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
And when Loki isn't looking River clubs him across the back of the head :)
So if that is her dad, who is her mother?
also "a rather man" - a rather what man?
Comments from author:
Sorry, hadn't noticed that! I've fixed that now. No idea who River's other parent is (Loki is possibly her mother, and is beig called Daddy because he's in his male form. Considering how easy it is to get Loki pregnant, it could be anyone and anything.)
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]