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Review of chapter "Fate's Beginning" from Cdog
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I've had this story saved to read later for a while now and I just finished the second chapter. I like all your stories, even the crazy ones like MLP even if it didn't turn out to be as crazy as I thought and you still owe us pony porn. I like your idea on the LoZ and I hope you do decide to continue it despite the lack of reviews. I finally posted a story on ff.net and I realize how exciting it is to get reviews, even if all they say is good job so... good job ;).

As to story ideas:

1)For the number of dungeons I think you should just stick to the number that moves the plot along. 3 dungeons for 3 keys to unlock the seal. 1 tomb for the armor of the Hero of Byzantia. Don't know how many weapons you plan to have, but I guess the same number as the weapons so maybe 11-12 dungeons/tombs.

2)Olaf's hammer is good. Olaf could be a former hero transformed into an evil troll and you have to purify the hammer so it won't corrupt anyone. All of the weapons could be corrupted by something and you killing the boss purifies it when their bodies ignite, which is what every Zelda boss does when defeated.The bow could be called the Bow of Van-Tal the original leader of the Aurelians. He or she hid the weapon when they were dying. Don't know what to do about shields.

3) Don't know about monsters. You might have to go with Zelda mainstays or use the Buffy equivalent of it.

I hope you continue this because I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this. If you really want to try for epic then you could pull a ME3 and try and unite the races against whatever Wilkins is trying to do.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fate's Beginning" from Eureka
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OK I had left a review when I first read this and now it is not there! :(
I really like this one Sith! The idea of Buffy and Zelda being merged is just...:))
Then of course instead of Buffy being the head it is Wills and it is just of the good! So Xander met his first bad girl and beat her with Buffy doing most of the beating of course, the Fairy has found him and now just needs to actually talk to him instead of whispering directions to him from under his hat! Wills knows that she needs to find him also...

As for your questions....Can you try to use each of the bad guys but jump them up a bit? I mean Coach with the mermen, Bug man, and such would be kinda cool to see in Zelda land! Ampata would be cool to see her turned to the good without having to kill her...
Review By [Eureka] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fate's Beginning" from Amberdrake
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The only bow I remember on Buffy is the one Faith stole in Bad Girls. But you could still name it after her. :D.. Now where's part 3? It's been hours since I read part 2.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [24 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Truths turn to Legend" from Amberdrake
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Excellent start.. Can't wait for more.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [24 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fate's Beginning" from ZeroCrimson
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It's unfortunate that I don't know nearly enough about Zelda or Buffy to help but I would greatly enjoy reading more of this brilliant story.
Review By [ZeroCrimson] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fate's Beginning" from RubyPaladin
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How about have the bow be equipable with bombs like in Twilight Princess and call it "Judge's Bane"?
Review By [RubyPaladin] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fate's Beginning" from Plaga
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Hey Sith, normally I just read the fics and don't contribute much but I've been following your stuff for the last couple of years and I have to tell you that they are some of the most entertaining stuff posted in here. Your xovers are really well constructed and shows a really creative mind. I really don't understand the lack of reviews because this one kicks more ass that usual. That's why I felt compelled to register just so I could post this review. Please keep it up and try to not get discouraged.

As far as the questions, you could use Coach Marrin (?) as the boss of the water temple and have him mutate your version of the Zoras. The earth gollems Willow created to fight Buffy could be your generic enemies in the overworld. Glory's lackeys could be jumped up a little bit and be used as dungeon enemies. The loan shark demon could also be used in the water temple.
Review By [Plaga] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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