This is a really fun and enjoyable story! I am not terribly familiar with NCIS -- my brother and dad watch it, but I haven't really ever -- but it's easy to follow the characters and get comfortable with them quite quickly as you've presented them. I also enjoyed how you slowly grew Xander and Ziva's relationship, rather than having one of those romantic-comedy type Moments where they just fall together. It's a very organic feel you've created here.

Thanks for taking the time to write this!

I think this is the third time I've reread this. Great story!

One of the best Xander focused stories I've read.

Oh, this is just to wonderful for words. I love that you got rid of Kennedy, I fully admit I missed the last season of Buffy but I just don't like the idea of Willow with a slayer like what I understand that girl to be. I really love how Xander got his gun back from the FBI. I really love this story and at this time I really can't express how much. I do however find it rather interesting that Xander actually told Ziva, Willow and his daughter the full unedited version of what had happened during that fateful summer he spent in Oxnard, when he had said many times that that was one story that would never be told.

I'm loving this story so far, but I'm a bit confused. Who is Miller seeing?

I hope that Ducky gets to do the autopsy for this one, it sounds like there's major anatomical differences.

Great story and even better ending!!!

Great story. I think I've read it before but still a really good read. Two thumbs up!

So totally a brilliant read that I had to go straight back to the beginning to read again.

Highly recommended !

This was excellent! Thanks for sharing :)

Thank you very much this is a great story and I feel you captured the characters very well.

Thank you for the review.

Nice ending. Keep up the good work thanks and bye.

Thanks, I'll try.

Sweet and fitting and awesome ending! :D
I really enjoyed reading the story.
Congrats on finishing this!

thank you for all your reviews.

Love this!

Thanks, I loved writing it.

Yay!!! I loved this story. Just sorry it's finished. Great job. Thank you.

Thanks for the review and the kind thoughts

one word:

KUDOS!


thanks for the ride!

You are welcome