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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty -- The Cobra Speaks" from EarnestScribbler
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I think I had almost the entire series when I was a kid. Thanks for the look back.
Review By [EarnestScribbler] • Date [31 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty -- Ethical Piracy" from DieselDriver
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Hmm. Does the "Sky Queen" have a pilot named "Penny"?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen -- First by Air" from DieselDriver
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Don't you just love it when you get a new project dumped on you that you aren't sure you can handle and told to run with it. Weeeee.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen -- Meltdown" from DieselDriver
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Well, when does Nancy Drew show up? ROFL. Yeah, I read a few of those too. So apparently Oz has found a way to pretty much control his shift? It's nice to see that he survived in this story.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten -- Captured" from DieselDriver
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Tee Hee! Those poor poor kidnappers. LOL
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six -- An Explosive Prize" from DieselDriver
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"miniature solar system right?" oh my, that model is just SSSsooooooo obsolete. LOL Quantum Mechanics pretty much demolished it. Electron clouds and quantum linking etc. Even a relatively simple electron beam and slit experiment shows that electrons are not strictly particles, nor are they strictly waves. Very strange from a macro point of view. Also makes obsolete all the stories that used to involve a person shrinking down forever and ever getting smaller, "The Incredible Shrinking Man" is one such. There was another one I can't remember the name of that was pretty cool, involved a creature from a universe many levels above ours in size and he was encountering them in order as he shrank through their respective sizes, eventually descending onto the earth from an atmosphere of a gas giant and our universe was a minor part of an upwelling of gas, hence the expanding universe.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six -- An Explosive Prize" from DieselDriver
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Buffy has been hiding her light under a bushel of bushels or she wouldn't be best friends with a genius. With everything on her plate and Snyder too and she still passed with halfway decent grades has to be indicative of that.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five -- The Spy?" from DieselDriver
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Willow is just scary smart! They'll like that there. Wonder if Tom's got a grandson, oh wait, never mind, Oz will be there shortly... Oops? Buffy could use a boyfriend...
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two -- Job Descriptions" from DieselDriver
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Bwahahahahahaha! Buffy needs to work on her muscleyness... RIGHT!

BTW, when I saw the title included "Girl Genius" is suspected that there would be a crossover with the web comic. So, we'll see. Tom Swift was a boy genius so it still fits.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One -- Internship Ho!" from DieselDriver
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Good start. Sure different from the last one I read which was the Capt. Tripps one. Haven't read the stand in a long time but it was just yesterday compared to when I read the Tom Swift books. I'd guess I was about 10 or 12 then... 50+ years ago.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty -- The Cobra Speaks" from deathgeonous
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Why have I never read this before? WHY!!!???!!! It was seriously good and fun, so, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty -- The Cobra Speaks" from legstanner
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I loved the story. Thanks for introducing me to the world of Tom Swift Jr. It's totally the kind of thing I would love.
Review By [legstanner] • Date [2 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty -- The Cobra Speaks" from legstanner
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I loved the story. Thanks for introducing me to the world of Tom Swift Jr. It's totally the kind of thing I would love.
Review By [legstanner] • Date [2 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six -- An Explosive Prize" from vitruvian
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Sorry, but 1 kg of antimatter reacting with regular matter won't cause any kind of chain reaction that would destroy the world. It will, however, act like about a 43 megaton bomb, so bad news for whoever's in proximity.
Comments from author:
Tom Swift jr. Science trumps reality...
Review By [vitruvian] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty -- The Cobra Speaks" from KJA
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I was surprised and excited to see a Tom Swift Jr. crossover fan fiction. My public library used to have the Tom Swift Jr books and I read them about twenty years ago. From what I remember you have done a good job of keeping Tom and company in character. I also like how you have gone about crossing it over with BtVS. I am now tracking the sequel you are writing and I look forward to seeing how Willow, Buffy, and Oz's future adventurers with Tom and SSI will play out.
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I tend to do crossovers with a lot of weird stuff, and I read TSjr, starting in the 60s. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you!
Review By [KJA] • Date [22 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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