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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Please continue (but avoid further Buffy bashing).
And one question: How can Willow become a ghost when she was dressed as Robin? That's a major plot hole!
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [30 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Short but a good story! I especially liked the details like Dawn eating too much and Batman having long hair. Who knew Batman would be good with kids! I wonder if magic can recharge Cordelia's battery?
Comments from author:
This story is open to whoever would like to run with it. so feel free to keep going ^_^
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I thought this was an excellent start to an alternate-Helloween. Nicely done.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Interesting. Cordelia will have to open up and care for others to actually spread love and recharge.

Willow infected by Fear? That explains so much about the things that happened to her in the series.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Darklight
Review:
like the start, going to be fun to see where Cordy will take this and what changes she's going to make.
Nice twist with Xander, lets seeif he can make himself some money and improve himself
Review By [Darklight] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
I liked a lot of this, but there were some issues. The three most significant were:

1. You told this almost completely from Cordy's POV, but that wasn't obvious unless you were a hardcore reader of Green Lantern, or read very closely. Occasionally referring to her as Carol Ferris might have helped.

2. You had Buffy as a young Wonder Woman; however you never actually had her speak, you just mysteriously had her knocked out. You never explained how WW allowed herself to be knocked out, nor why she didn't die once she did. EDIT: Sorry, you just had her mysteriously vanish in plain sight. My mistake.

3. You had Willow say that she didn't get anything from Ethan's, yet she turned into a ghost? How?

On a minor note, you had Cordy a lot nastier then she appeared to be at this time, before. You also gave Angel a well-deserved talking to.

A good start.
Comments from author:
Actually, no, Buffy was not a young Diana, she was Cassie. Since Cassie is blonde. Also, I'm not so much a fan of Cassie and I wanted to keep the Buffy = useless vibe of the Halloween episode.

Willow Said "No, not Really, Most of it cam from Buffy's closet." Implying that there were in fact pieces from Ethan's; most is not All.

And yes. I am assuming whoever might be reading a Green Lantern crossover fic does in fact know about Green Lantern.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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