Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from justjoanjm
I like it :) Can't wait for more!
Review By [justjoanjm
] • Date [25 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from twlight
I love this so far. I am looking forward to learning how Xander and Millie know each other. I also am looking forward to learning why Ron was so certain that Harry was dark now even before he had come back, yes I know that Ron is an idiot but I would love to see his reasoning behind his thought process to come to this conclusion. I do have to wonder what Snape and MaGonagall's reactions are to learning about Wyatt are. I am of course eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful wonderful story so far.
Review By [twlight
] • Date [30 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Homecoming" from Orical
very nice love what you have done here hope to see more soon please
Review By [Orical
] • Date [24 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from musumenosuoh
oh so very cool!!!! very can't wait for more!!!
Review By [musumenosuoh
] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from SusanAnthony
I am so glad to see more of this story! It was fun to reread and then read the new part. I hope you post more again soon. I'd like to see what Hallie has in store for Dumbledore.
Review By [SusanAnthony
] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from ChaosLady
Short but sweet, but it's been too long!
Review By [ChaosLady
] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Eureka
:') Finally an update!!!!! 2 YEARS I have been waiting for an update on this fine story, and you finally give us a new one! YEAH!!!
Hope a new chapter comes around MUCH faster than this one...can't wait to see what H is going to do to D for hurting so many children.
Review By [Eureka
] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Silver
Yay! An Update! . So very glad you finally updated this; I was afraid it had been abandoned. I didn't post 2 reviews; I tried to edit a previous one and it seems to have posted as a new review... sorry. Adored the bit about Snape and Minerva leaving Dumbles during his chewing out by Halfrek. Thanks for answering part of my previous questions - " What did Coop mean by " Who dares block one of ours?" So Dumbles blocked them both... grrr. From Hallie's words, it seems as if Hogwarts herself will not let Xan & Wyatt leave... is this because of Wyatt being heir of Camelot? Please please please update tis soonest!
Review By [Silver
] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Justice" from Silver
Wow! this is great! Love the way Draco & Harry are more , well, normal so to speak. Draco isn't the whiny idiot he was portrayed as, and Harry isn't the angsty whiny emo kid... well not so much. Am Very curious to see what Coop found out... what was that bit about "Who dared to block one of ours?" What does that mean and which one of the boys is it releated to? Also interesting bit with Millicent. What's the history with her and Xan? And the eyes flashing green bit? Is that because they are in a family pack bond with Xan *cough-Hyena-cough*? Love Hallie coming in and snapping at Dumbles and Snape. and it appears the castle likes them too- or is it because Wyatt is King of Magic? Keep up the good work and update soonest! Oh - one more thing, please please please don't abandon " you told us you only made it as far as Oxnard"; it is far too good to stop!
Review By [Silver
] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bigfanficlover
Yay!!!! You finally update this story. This is a great chapter, I love how Hallie was just chewing Dumbledoor up! It was awesomely funny. Please update again soon :)
Review By [Bigfanficlover
] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Justice" from LadySybyl
A neat idea, be interesting to see where this goes!
Review By [LadySybyl
] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Justice" from jgoodman
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Review By [jgoodman
] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Justice" from Netchka
Hmmmmm. Interesting. Love the story. Good pairings. Hope to read the next chapters soon. Thanks.
Review By [Netchka
] • Date [15 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Justice" from jcon
Good to read Dumbles getting pulled down a peg or three. Enjoying this story & looking forward to more.
Review By [jcon
] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Justice" from SusanAnthony
You go, Halfrek! I can't wait to see what she has in mind for Dumbledore! I am really enjoying this story.
Review By [SusanAnthony
] • Date [6 Dec 11] • Not Rated