Wow! this is great! Love the way Draco & Harry are more , well, normal so to speak. Draco isn't the whiny idiot he was portrayed as, and Harry isn't the angsty whiny emo kid... well not so much. Am Very curious to see what Coop found out... what was that bit about "Who dared to block one of ours?" What does that mean and which one of the boys is it releated to? Also interesting bit with Millicent. What's the history with her and Xan? And the eyes flashing green bit? Is that because they are in a family pack bond with Xan *cough-Hyena-cough*? Love Hallie coimg in and snapping at Dumbles. and snape. and it appears the castle likes thme too- or is it because Wyatt is King of Magic? Keep up the good work and update soonest! Oh - one more thing, please please please don't abandon " you told us you only made it as far as Oxnard"; it is far too good to stop!
With Hallie's help justice really will be served. When Anya was Anyanka, she really was a VENGEANCE demon. She revelled in destroying men in gruesome ways to gain revenge on them. When Hallie called herself a Justice demon, I could agree with that a bit more, because she genuinely seemed to want to help, even if her spells had some odd consequences like everyboy being trapped in the Summers house unable to leave because of Dawn's W-I-S-H. I know that she said that Snape should have been one of hers, but even if he had a horrible childhood, Snape grew up to be a horrible bully himself. Especially towards Harry. I am curious as to what Coop found in the guys' magic.
Review By [kayron] • Date [5 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I kinda thought that Hallie was dead....or did D'Hoffryn simply fake killing her?
Still, excellent chappie.
Dumbles is going to be sorry that he pissed off the Justice Demon of Lost Childhoods.
There are a LOT of kids that have been screwed with by the Headmaster and Voldemort, and she's going to have a merry old time messing with them before letting them die.
Comments from author:
Hallie still being alive will be explained in a chapter or two...but yeah, D'Hoffryn "killed" her to punish Anya.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Good chapter. Thanks for continuing. Also thanks for the photos. An achievement to work out that much and be able to do anything else, but my initial comments were a little on the "blue" side.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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