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Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from LordSia
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Oh, this is very good. A bit over the top, and slightly rushed - it would have been better to see them slowly change. First adopting the fleur de lis as their symbol, while using the two-headed eagle - one eye open, one eye closed being the traditional depiction - as Xander's coat of arms. Then they start wearing more armour and using more modern weapons. The mk 19 automatic 40mm grenade launchers look almost exactly like a bolter, the shells look like bolt shells, they've got enough punch to put down just about any demon, and a Slayer is probably strong enough to wield one as a rifle... Yeah.

I can see them recruiting Andrew or some other spell slingers to put together working las guns - the lore says they can be recharged simply by leaving the power packs in the sun, so why not make them magic guns shooting concentrated bursts of sunlight? Works like a charm against Vampires, and probably pretty useful against other monsters as well if they are can be blessed. I can see the girls persuading Xander - not that it would take much, mind - to adopt more "Guardsmen" to watch their backs; outcastes, gangsters, punks, and of course the boyfriends who pass muster and can deal with their girlfriend being a mystically empowered part-time demon hunter. Then, Guardsmen become Storm Troopers as the first lasguns are replaced by back-pack powered hellguns with enough power to kill off just about any demon in the night...

Great idea, and as you can see, it got my creative juices flowing. Keep up the good work.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [28 May 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from blackicelycan
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This is great I wish you had more to it!
Review By [blackicelycan] • Date [8 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from EdBecerra
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Someone REALLY needs to do a fan-art of that final scene.
Review By [EdBecerra] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from IrFane
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Nice. Side note, Latin does have an 'I' noun, you just don't see it (at least in beginning studies) much because 'I die' is a single word.
Review By [IrFane] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from Balder
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Excellent story! I can just see the expression on the faces of the other Scoobies. :D
Review By [Balder] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from LFW
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Real good fic
I am surprised at the marching and the tattoo on the face,, if only for the ability to stay out of the public eye. Anymore and people see the girls marching and they pull out a phone and video it.
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [6 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from warfolomei
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Short and funny. Maybe one more chapter would be nice.
Review By [warfolomei] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from RockyWilliams
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Fun little story. Well worth reading :)
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from CPTSkip
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I liked! Will there be more?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from AnimeRonin
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I'm surprised he didn't go Ork and have WAAAAAUGHHH! tattooed on him. Still, nice.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from cwolf
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If Buffy complains, it won't matter. He wants them to stay alive. Whatever makes them happy within reason he's happy with (at least that's what I'm taking away from this.)
Review By [cwolf] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from eriktheviking
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A cracking good set-up that begs to be expanded.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from DeRagnus
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One chapter and its over already? Come on, that one chapter was awesome. MOAR FICTION FOR THE FICTION GOD! STORIES FOR THE STORY THRONE! Ahem. *cough* yeah, I'd love to see this continued.
Review By [DeRagnus] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from EdBecerra
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Pretty good. I enjoyed it, and that seldom happens with one-shots that aren't humor.

One note, latin does have the pronoun you're looking for.

"ego," meaning self, or "I". (Though translations depends...)

Ed.
Review By [EdBecerra] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kindling a light for the future." from SamDragon
Review:
Will the Emperor do anything.More please.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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