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TouchoftheWindReview:
Great
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TouchoftheWind] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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GartabroReview:
I have no idea of how things happen in the comics (I plan to find out. Once I find the comics...), so I'm following the movie: if he appeared during the Halloween episode, does that mean that there was time-travel involved? Or did he simply end in a different dimension? The Hellmouth is always doing that kind of thing, at least in fanfiction...
I love the idea of Loki in Sunnydale. If he meets Ethan... Or the Scoobies (again), they might be the good guys, but they tend to be rather chaotic, XD. Seriously, if they convinced him not to be evil, he would fit in their dysfunctional family (Anya did, at least, and she used to *love* her job).
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Gartabro] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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CrystalBlazeReview:
This does seem to be a decent explanation for how Loki first became aware of Xander.
And the Hellmouth does so love to suck in all approaching supernaturals, how could it not draw in a God of Mischief while being piggybacked by a God of Change?
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CrystalBlaze] • Date [2 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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VillageOrchidReview:
An interesting time to make an arrival. Considering that Janus is involved, it makes sense that this could be Loki and not just someone who dressed as Loki.
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VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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xandersgirlReview:
This is nice.
But the question is, was that really Loki or just someone that dressed as him? Hmmm I guess we'll never know.
Great job.
XG
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xandersgirl] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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EllandrahSylverReview:
This is cute. If you plan to leave it a one-shot, that's cool, but there's so much potential for mischief and mayhem in this story that it could be much, much more. Well written and funny, and well... I can see so much happening because Loki is around. *grins*
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EllandrahSylver] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]