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jconReview:
I did have a thing about the ages in this until I read Dawn's little speech. The I went okay then. Interesting fluff.
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jcon] • Date [16 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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MountainWilliam Review:
Hey, Dawn has culinary skills! Not her fault no one else can stand to eat (or smell... or look at... hell, probably even hear some of) her creations! lol Great story! Very witty and droll. Thanks for sharing.
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Heh... I did mention one of her creations in another story: her 'All White Work'.
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MountainWilliam ] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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BrownFinderth Review:
Very good story!!! I really liked the way Dawn went for Gibbs!
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BrownFinderth ] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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ArgyleButterflyReview:
Very sweet I like your mature portrayal of Dawn.
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ArgyleButterfly] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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clockworkorange Review:
Oh wow, I think I actually like this pairing. Or at least, the way you wrote it. Loved Dawn's speech to Gibbs toward the end.
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clockworkorange ] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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Gideon Review:
She could always dye her hair?
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Gideon ] • Date [2 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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serenityselena Review:
awesome story.... nice speech from Dawn though very true ^__^
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serenityselena ] • Date [2 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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pinkhairedharryReview:
sorry bad connection posted the review multiple times. I wish there was a way to delete multi-posts
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pinkhairedharry] • Date [2 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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pinkhairedharryReview:
I like this. Could you do a xan/abby? I also want to see the xan/ziva fic
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pinkhairedharry] • Date [2 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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HiltonKReview:
Need the Xan/Ziva bit please ;)
Comments from author:
And for that, you get a spot on my Wishlist. It's December already, and I still have 6 spots available, so I'm going to put the next six review-based prompts on the list. Congratulations ;) (Do you have a livejournal account?)
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HiltonK] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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PATM Review:
Unlikely pairing but a brilliant read. And that trumps pairing issues I may have.
Comments from author:
Thanks :D
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PATM ] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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kweandee Review:
lol...cute :)
Comments from author:
Thanks :)
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kweandee ] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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VillageOrchid Review:
Strangely (for me), I liked it.
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VillageOrchid ] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated