Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kaleecat
I remember enjoying the original story, but I love this one. Your Xander is savvy, and intelligent and still so full of heart. I like how he develops a solution for the cars and his relationship with Spike. And the hell-puppy is adorable. You leave it open for more, and I hope you somehow return to this universe because this Xander is so engaging.
Review By [kaleecat
] • Date [12 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sistercity
Brilliant story. I liked your characterisation of both Xander and Spike. Would like to read more about Xander, Spike and the dog if you have any ideas, as you hinted at future things in the story.
Some small typos but nothing really mentionable.
Review By [sistercity
] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
that was a interesting piece, to be certain.
I liked it.
It does mean that, however depraved and unintentional, Caleb's attempt to blind Xander and Spike's saving an eye actually balanced the scales on two issues (Spike getting unchipped by Xander's sincere wish and Xander's aiding Lucifer) while saving him sight in at least one eye.
King Leonidas: Dilios, I trust that "scratch" hasn't made you useless.
Dilios: Hardly, my lord, it's just an eye. The gods saw fit to grace me with a spare.
Need I really say more?
Review By [CrystalBlaze
] • Date [2 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LLN
Review By [LLN
] • Date [2 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hpssslashfan
I like this ending a whole lot better, the "time-loop" interaction was interesting and poor Spike is in for some serious downtime to heal. I hope you continue this story line.
Review By [hpssslashfan
] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]