Review of chapter "Hey, sand and mime!" from ZippySaboteur
Reading this story had the same effect on my brain as watching FLCL. Thank you.
Review By [ZippySaboteur
] • Date [22 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hey, sand and mime!" from Wizzzard
A wonderful crack fic, I laughed the whole way though
Review By [Wizzzard
] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hey, sand and mime!" from Shadowrunner
Okay, this is delightfully twisted and friggin hilarious, my favorite lines were "My bologna throbs" and "I swear I will cut you- engage mother engage!" laughed myself sick after reading those, hope you keep up the funny work
Review By [Shadowrunner
] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hey, sand and mime!" from gaulty
Review By [gaulty
] • Date [23 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hey, sand and mime!" from dogbertcarroll
That is all.
Review By [dogbertcarroll
] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hey, sand and mime!" from mackenziex
Complete and utter irredeemable crack.
And I love it! More please? [sweet smile]
Review By [mackenziex
] • Date [8 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hey, sand and mime!" from Bobboky
very very good
Review By [Bobboky
] • Date [8 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hey, sand and mime!" from TDK
Hinata get's booted from her team ... to suna. While yes I know this is a crack fic. Doing that just screwed the fic for me so good luck with your writing. You do have some great and funny ideas.
Review By [TDK
] • Date [8 May 12] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hey, sand and mime!" from eriktheviking
Well done insanity.
Review By [eriktheviking
] • Date [8 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hey, sand and mime!" from frankocsic
Great update! :D
Review By [frankocsic
] • Date [8 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "But nobody sang for dango" from Zulaq
I can't wait to see the reactions of the shinobi from other villages during the Chuunin exams. I can see things just going off the rails into crazy as every foreigner tries to figure out what's going on (either that or are even crazier than Konoha; Gaara as Ranma 1/2?).
Review By [Zulaq
] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "But nobody sang for dango" from valdimarian
So I had an idea for furthering the Ninja / Magical Girl transformations... kind of a blatant one, but it has to be said.
Sakura obviously likes books and learning right...? How about if she finds a special book in the Library, one written by Clow Reed.
'Cause if you're going to have Magical Girls pop up, the symmetry of having Sakura turn into Card Captor Sakura is just too funny.
Review By [valdimarian
] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "But nobody sang for dango" from KrisB
I love this story! I hope that you can keep it up as well.
There were two ideas that I think that you need to add...
Dragon Ball Z and Disgaea elements. Dragon Ball Z is a great excuse to give some one flying ability and Ki blast ability.
My thoughts on Disgaea would be when Naruto's ticked and decides to have his team go through what he considers actually dangerous insane training to level up.
You don't have to know more about Disgaea other than it is the one RPG series that's known for extreme power leveling of stats and the item world (just an excuse to power up any item.) My basic thoughts would be that Naruto has an okuto friend that he's made a justu for, but has never been stupid enough to try it. Basic concept of justu would stick Naruto and team in a chosen video game, manga, or anime and let them power up or learn skills as they go through the series. You could even add a time compression so the okuto is playing the game for a as long as they want to get every thing just perfect...
What's really fun with that concept is that you can have the entire team terrified of meeting this person and it would be a cute girl... or maybe Ayame. They do the justu and the okuto is thrilled with the chance to power up their friend... and customize their abilities and such.
When some one mentioned that Pluto is likely out drunk some where that just begs a scene with our favorite gambler and drunk where Sailor Pluto makes a bad bet and looses her post as Sailor Pluto and Guardian of Time. I nominate Shizune to win and also get something as awesome from the other party as well.
Review By [KrisB
] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "But nobody sang for dango" from mountainelements
Chouji as Sailor Moon... I'm not sure whether to laugh or cringe. Poor Tenten, having to train just as hard as Sakura and Ino. At least her Tuxedo Kamen powers should help her out. And the gang finally makes it back! Thanks for the update! :)
Review By [mountainelements
] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "But nobody sang for dango" from Tea
Oh Dear Bob in Heaven! I LOVE it. This is the best, the most crackiest, loveliest, funniest thing in the world. I love Anko and Gai and to not only have them in a story, but with teams that work not just with them but for them, is AWESOME! I too read team Anko, and while I love it I am glad that your story is so different. I need more, I need more like Sasuke Chan needs to get stronger. Please tell me that you have more chapters ready to go, oh please oh please.
Your dedicated stalker, Tea
Review By [Tea
] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]