Review of chapter "Not Always Blood" from jedibuttercup
Review:
Nice! I always enjoy crossovers with Castle, and this one was sweet.
Review By [jedibuttercup] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Always Blood" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Absolutely great little piece of their lives! The 2nd person bit is a bit hard to follow for figuring POV, though.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Always Blood" from DeacBlue
Review:
The story's not bad, but unless you're doing it specifically for effect, you need to have only one person speaking per paragraph, otherwise it needlessly confuses people.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your comment.
Review By [DeacBlue] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]