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Review of chapter "without form and void" from meri
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This story is off to a good start, I can't wait to see where it goes next!
Review By [meri] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "without form and void" from starwolf
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looks interesting, what happened to the scythe, can she summon it if needed?
I'll read more, thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [3 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "without form and void" from Selonianth
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So mannerisms, habits, etc, stuck. Just nothing specific, and the Valar decided to be semi-dicks and not give her a lick of language to communicate with.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [31 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "without form and void" from Calypso
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I think this is a wonderful start to your story, and I would gobble the rest of it up if it were here, no problem! It's interesting how you planted the unknowing shieldmaiden in a place where her kind are known, but skills not applied, and also not near the Elves as most stories start.

I enjoyed these few chapters and I look forward to read the rest whenever you are inspired to write this again. Thanks, and have a happy New Year x
Review By [Calypso] • Date [29 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "without form and void" from DieselDriver
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I am really looking forward to reading more of this story. You've made a very interesting beginning.

Thanks for posting it.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [13 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "without form and void" from Xayian
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Okay, I'm hooked. Ya got me. I'm in for the long and short of it. You will be tracked and cataloged in the read as updated column. There's no kickin me to the curb on this one because I'm in it for the long haul.

Capiscé

Oh yeah...Awesome job!
Review By [Xayian] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "without form and void" from starshinedown
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I like this beginning, and hope you come back to Genesis sooner rather than later. There's a tremendous amount of potential here. It's nice to see Buffy plunked into Middle Earth and not immediately be in the Fellowship or immediately in love with Legolas or Aragorn. :-) Hooray for variety and a different approach!
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "without form and void" from spikeismine
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Please update soon.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [27 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "without form and void" from (Recent Donor)SweetChi
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This is an absolutely fantastic start! I'm already completely enthralled and can't wait to see where this goes. Your writing, as always, is superb - you can really feel the POV shift with each character, something that's really hard to capture (or maybe that's just me... :P). This must be a beast to work on, between the amnesia, the language barrier and the research you must've put in. But your hard word is certainly paying off - seriously an impressive read so far. You know I'm going to give you no peace about updating this now, right? :P
Review By [(Recent Donor)SweetChi] • Date [14 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "without form and void" from justapiranha
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I have to say I love this fic. I look forward to reading more.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "without form and void" from AngelBlack
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Wonderfully written! And how far does Buffy/Lihtwen's lack of knowledge extend? Does she realize she's not in the same time/place?
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "without form and void" from GypsyWitch
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can't wait to read more!
Review By [GypsyWitch] • Date [29 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "without form and void" from PATM
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Awesome story.
Review By [PATM] • Date [28 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "without form and void" from AnneLilian
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Great story so far, I can't wait to read what Buffy was actually saying during her rant ^^
Please update soon!
Review By [AnneLilian] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "without form and void" from AllenPitt
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Gandalf might get a big shock if he seems the amulet & realizes what it is.. I do like the not speaking any Middle Earthian language and not joining the Fellowship.
Hopefully the amnesia won't last forever... it could cut down on her quip-age. ... Any chance Spike will re-materialize 'here'? He'd be a very weird character to have in ME, admittedly.
The Rohirrim --good choice, they somewhat accept women warriors. And with her strength & skills, no problems with medieval fighting/weapons. If anything this is a place where she can really shine--no guns, physical strength matters a lot, and all that.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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