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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
wow
Review By [bradsan] • Date [29 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
That was cool.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from enderverse
Review:
Interesting, but I don't get the summary. Where does it imply they create or destroy them? As far as I remember they just move them around. Especially when Spike got his soul, no orb involved.

This is a fun idea but I don't get where you get the idea that they are created.
Review By [enderverse] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChaosLady
Review:
Why did they need to create an Orb of Theselah? It's been so long since I read the Shadow and Light series I forgot where we left off...
Comments from author:
I don't know.

Yet.

Still, I figure it's kind of like keeping a screwdriver in your purse. You never know when one will come in handy . . .
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Meneldur
Review:
Very powerful. I liked your ideas about the Orb of Thesulah. It was a very interesting death scene, and I loved all the allusions/references - classical and otherwise.
I'm not sure how it's all connected, of course - we haven't seen how Catherine and Jarod became involved with the Scoobies, and how Catherine and Willow became girlfriends. I assume there may be some connection to Ethan, though that's assuming a lot. But I hope we shall see.
Comments from author:
Miss Parker and Jarod meet the Scoobies in Haven and Home, and earlier story in this series. Willow shows definite interest in her. Ethan (I hope) will show up later, but as far as I know (unless my muse clocks me) the last names are a coincidence.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
An excellent deathbed scene.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banner
Review:
You moved me to tears. That something lovely and powerful can be brought from the corrupt and ultimately useless evil of such a man is ... it makes so many injuries hurt less.

Thank you.
Comments from author:
Thank you, sir.
Review By [banner] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JasonBarnett
Review:
I never thought an orb of Thesela was designed to create a soul just to pull it out of the aether basically.
Comments from author:
That's what the Buffy-pedia says (and I did not read until I checked the spelling of Thesulah), but I contend that, like matter and energy, souls can neither be created nor destroyed. (And, yes, I thought Fred got a raw deal.)
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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