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Review of chapter "Home sweet Hellmouth" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Home sweet Hellmouth" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
good he is back on his feet again and you are asking us what we want in this story? *shakesheadandchuckles*
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The way back" from michaelangelo
Review:
Okay, I have a couple of tips. First, use a spell checker, if you don't have one, google for an online one. Second, it's don't, can't won't not don 't, can 't, won 't. My rythm of reading kind of stumbles when I hit those. Besides those pet gripes, nice story, very enjoyable indeed.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The way back" from DennSedai
Review:
*grins* Nice... very nicely done and carefully set. Happy New Years as well.
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The way back" from frankocsic
Review:
Those are great wishes. Can't wait to see how Xander makes use of the last two. Good job.
Review By [frankocsic] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I am dreaming or what!" from Eureka
Review:
Love the new chapter. Here's some Ginger Snaps.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [24 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I am dreaming or what!" from Evilsandman
Review:
Damn that was fast! Have a cookie! Thank you for updating so fast. I look forward to the rest of your story.
Comments from author:
Love cookies! Gingerbread in the shape of a Christmas tree are my favorite.
It is the giving season so....
Review By [Evilsandman] • Date [24 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How did that happen?" from Evilsandman
Review:
You are an evil evil author! Please update soon!
Comments from author:
thank you, that was what I was going for!
And I have just updated because I don´t want to be totally evil!
Review By [Evilsandman] • Date [24 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How did that happen?" from Eureka
Review:
HEY!! No fair a cliffy right before Christmas!!!
Noticed a few mistakes and will try to help you with them, but it will have to wait a bit.
Comments from author:
Hehe, I just could not help myself!
I know there are there but those little buggers are hiding from me. If you want to help that would be awesome just let me know when you can!
Merry Christmas!!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How did that happen?" from Sahugani
Review:
the story is pretty good if a bit rough. I hope you keep at it.

One minor thing. I thing most of them would have recognized the symbol of the Aes Sedai as being very similar to the yin yang and commented on it.

The edit is because I have a tenancy to skim a bit and missed the description of the symbol on the blade so when when Xander said the symbol on the blade was that of the Aes Sedai I automatically thought of the rings with snake eating its tail which Giles would note it's similarity to the Ouroboros.
Comments from author:
Hehe, I do that to sometimes! Thanks for the review and the story is a bit rough I know but once I find a beta for it the story will be a lot better!
Review By [Sahugani] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How did that happen?" from DarthPayne
Review:
Hey now, you can't leave us hanging at christmas...
Comments from author:
Hehe, sorry I couldn´t help myself!
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How did that happen?" from ladiciusevol
Review:
Excellent story, I have really enjoyed reading it so far.
Comments from author:
thanks, I am glad that you are enjoying it!
Review By [ladiciusevol] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How did that happen?" from grd
Review:
Evil cliffy
Comments from author:
Yes very Evil but just updated so I am not totally evil
Review By [grd] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - I have Powers" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I think this has potential.

Rand's being Lews Therin reborn and his parting wish for Xander is what rekindled the One Power and the rest, but Saidin has a complement. I figure some events will eventually awaken Saidar in a woman of Xander's acquaintence. (Possibly Anya, once her medallion is shattered.)

Essentially, the Wheel is starting to turn for the Buffyverse. Here's hoping the changover of Ages doesn't require a world-breaking this time..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [20 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - I have Powers" from Hanzo
Review:
fantastic
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [19 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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