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Review of chapter "Is It Fall Yet?" from unicornzvi
Very nice, although I need to nit pick Eric's confession - I really can't see him using the term 'cool' that way. "part of the in crowd" or various other "adult" and "professional" sounding terms which mean essentially the same thing are possible but that doesn't fit.
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Is It Fall Yet?" from slmncpm
i just found this series of stories and read them all straight through. they are great and i can't wait for more of this to follow. *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [18 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Is It Fall Yet?" from CrystalBlaze
No women can share the same room?

Aside from the invasion of privacy, the fact of the law being blatantly unconstitutional means that Angier Sloane has indeed given these idiots enough rope to hang themselves.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Is It Fall Yet?" from Martin
There is nothing unlawful or unconstitutional about that law. There was a similar one in Detroit. It was originally meant to curb whore houses. For a long time it just wasn't enforced, but I think they eventually repealed it. So while it is an awful law, unless it happens in a state like California there isn't likely anything you can do about it. However, you would likely not have a hard time having it thrown out on a technicality, since a) the signatures were forged or b) it was seemingly introduced and enacted too quickly. However, someone could easily do it legitimately afterwards if the votes were really there.
Comments from author:
Actually, at the very least, the stupid churchmen version of the law is unconstitutional; very possibly, the indifferent policemen version is, as well. It goes to unreasonable search and seizure. The fact that it was unconstitutional is probably why they never enforced it - police were and are always looking for a lever to attack crime.

None of this has anything to do with the arguments that will be made at the end of season 5.
Review By [Martin] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Is It Fall Yet?" from ShalaDakiri
"multiple occupants of a single room of the same gender prohibited."

huh. So, what about dormitories? Or jail cells? Could get expensive to ensure 'proper' housing.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I'm trying to decide if the policemen misread it when they were arresting her, or the holy rollers were just that stupid setting it up. Current balance is for the stupid churchmen
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [16 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode Ten" from CrystalBlaze
Interesting take. I honestly didn't expect Linda to be so murderous. So careless, yes.

I really have to feel badly for Sandra Griffin right now. However warped her upbringing and past has made her, this will be seriously messing with her. I just hope she doesn't enbd up trying to kill her mother over this--she doesn't need to be jailed for it on top of the rest.
Comments from author:
Honestly, at this point, she's not thinking of anything other than that Daddy's dead, and that horrible scene of him with a flattened head. She might become aware of other things some time in the next day.

As far as Linda goes, he wouldn't finance her blow buy, so she found a way to finance it, herself, as the strong, independent woman *spits* she is.

I've got three more episodes in this season; watch for some major changes back home in Lawndale before the amigas go to Ashfield and summer tour , and before they try and make a quote from Season One, Episode Four come true.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [14 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode Eight" from CrystalBlaze
Oh, boy. Sandi Griffin's going to try something on Daria when Linda rants about Helen once the coke source is gone and she's very possibly getting arrested.

And it's all very logical. Bother, as Pooh Bear would say.
Comments from author:
And I hope the next chapter is just as logical.....
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode Two" from Hecatonchires
"Would you like to be the filling in a sandwich?" Daria whispered into Jen's ear as she slowly slipped her semi-hard schlong into her sexy suitemate.

This line is so bad it made me actually lol :)
Comments from author:
*winks* Everyone knows that porn stars do things in alliteration.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [13 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode One" from DarthBill
Nice story.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much.
Review By [DarthBill] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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