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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from UnseenWatcher
Review:
I love it. Water abilities with a chance of them ditching the WW entirely. I hope they bring the Twins, Luna, and Neville in on it too. heh.
Comments from author:
Yep, Atlantean abilities are pretty cool, indeed. ;-)

And at this point in time, Harry and Hermione's mindset is basically, 'There's us, and there's them', with basically nothing in-between. If you recall from JKR's canon, Harry received absolutely NO assistance from any of the teaching staff, whatsoever, and he got very little assistance from his Housemates, aside from them cheering for him when he was winning. Everyone aside from Hermione and Hagrid was either hostile, useless or a fanboy/girl.
Review By [UnseenWatcher] • Date [18 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from hamishog
Review:
Someday somebody is going to write a story in which Ron isn't a total git. With Hermione to vet the planning and Ron as a consultant on the Wizarding World as well as Harry's fame as a platform those three could have taken over the world, at twelve. Oh well. JKR has one thing in common with Joss - it's not about the story; it's about what we can do to the people in the story. That and the fact that they both have a fondness for using broken people to push the narrative.
Comments from author:
I've written several stories where Ron isn't a total git, but his canon depiction in this part of the series was seriously irritating, so he was checked form the trio because of excessive obnoxiousness.

And both JKR and Joss try to promote the drama above characterization. ;-(
Review By [hamishog] • Date [3 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Silver
Review:
Argh! I finally find this again, and it has not been updated. I was hoping it would be. Pooh! I would like to see what these two do the surface/wizarding world. Hermione, especially, appears particularly vindictive... not to mention very smart. Dumbledork had best run far, far, away.. and what will happen to Filch? If it's Filch that is, seeing as how he is supposed to be a squib. Please, please, please, update soonest! Pretty please with cookies on top?
Comments from author:
I'm trying to get this one finished, but my muse as the attention span of a sugared-up five-year-old on LSD. ;-(

Hopefully, it'll be one of my August Fic-A-Day updates. ;-)
Review By [Silver] • Date [21 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from twlight
Review:
More please! I love this wonderful story so far. I really love how Harry and Hermione have removed the power that some of the teachers had or thought that they had. I also really love how the two of them think about both the tournament and the officials of it.
Comments from author:
Glad you like the story. There's only one or, possibly, two more chapters left for this one.
Review By [twlight] • Date [31 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from serenityselena
Review:
oh dear... that was an unexpected event...
looking forward to reading more ^_^
Comments from author:
Yes, it was. And Harry and Hermione usually don't respond very well to surprises. ;-)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [17 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from DieselDriver
Review:
I'm sure looking forward to reading more of this. I really like this Harry and Hermione. The H & H Magnum couple!
Comments from author:
Yep, this pairing definitely one you want to get on the wrong side of. ;-)
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [24 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from mwinter
Review:
Thank you for the update. Awaiting more at your pace.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I appreciate your reviewing and letting me know you enjoyed the story.

More updates will appear once my wife has recovered and life gives me more time to write.
Review By [mwinter] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from TharzZzDunN
Review:
The only thing I'm missing from this story is the bloody slaughter this pairing is going to embark on!

Cheers~!
Comments from author:
Don't worry, I've been saving those parts for the next chapter. ;-)
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Eureka
Review:
More?
Comments from author:
Was working on the next chapter last night. Hopefully, it'll be ready to post soon.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [8 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from dialNforNinja
Review:
Heh, nice. I'd kind of like to see a short-to-medium treatment of a story where Harry and (true companion(s)) pull off a political win like this to get rid of the Supposed Good Guys manipulating them, then are suh-kuh-REWD when the Obvious Bad Guys are still around and eager to take advantage of the loss of the highly effective screen the other side had been providing to keep Harry and co. apart from outside influences.

And then have him win anyway, because fuck downer endings, but do it by having to fight twice as hard for lack of support, however questionably intended, and end up cursing the Supposed Good Guys twice over for all the heartache and trouble that could have been avoided if they were honestly on his side and trustworthy.

(edit because I got sidetracked from actually talking about your story) As it stands, though, it looks like you're getting ready to wrap things up with this year, and that's something I've always said should have been done in canon so I have no complaints on that front.
Comments from author:
As far as Harry and Hermione are concerned, they have no true allies aside from Sirius and Remus, and they are surrounded by several groups of enemies with differing degrees of intent to harm or kill them - Riddle and his Death Eaters, Dumbledore and his minions, and Fudge and the rest of idiots at the Ministry.

They've managed to mostly neutralize one group (Dumbledore and his minions) and have redirected the focus of another (the Ministry), so they only need to deal with Tommy-boy and his minions to move into a position where they can reasonably expect to be left alone.

And, as you pointed out, that final confrontation is imminent, and it is going to be a lot more significant than it was in JKR's canon-verse.
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [30 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Cateagle
Review:
[Que "Dragnet" TV theme] Methinks Tom and minion(s) will really regret this; getting *this* Hermione truly pissed off is a nice way to get yourself killed. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter and seeing how this works out.
Comments from author:
Yes, I think that Tom and company are going to seriously regret screwing with this version of Harry and Hermione. ;-)

Not sure when the next chapter will appear - that's entirely up to my muse.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [13 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from mwinter
Review:
Awaiting more.
Comments from author:
Working on this as my muse dictates. ;-)
Review By [mwinter] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Water covers 75 percent of the earth and countless treasures have been lost at sea. I doubt they'll stick around topside with all that's below waiting to be discovered.
Comments from author:
Quite true. I can't see them hanging around the Wizarding World after the Tournament, regardless, especially since, as you pointed out, they have access to so much more of the world than the rest of humanity does.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [29 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. ;-)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from musumenosuoh
Review:
very cool! did have to reread, as it's been awhile, but enjoyed it! looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.

Hopefully, the next chapter won't be as long in showing up.
Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [25 Aug 13] • Not Rated
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