Only problem I had was that Buffy died 3 times. The Master, the tower, and after Warren shot her. Right as Willow showed up and removed the bullet, Buffy flatlined. So she technically died three times.
The House elves one was already addressed but not that Buffy one.
Aside from those, this was cute and funny, very much loved. Kudos to you
Comments from author:
Yikes, so sorry it took me so long to answer this review... I guess you're right, Buffy did die three times - I didn't remember her flatlining after she got shot. Sorry! Glad you enjoyed it otherwise! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [AstridWinchester] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
LMAO! The chosen 2 having it out over who's better. Although, I think it's kinda even. Then again, if Buffy fights a dragon then she would totally win.
Comments from author:
I feel like an ass for answering this review so late... *cringe* Thanks for popping over to leave the review here, AG!
Review By [AwesomeGeek] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Never leave the chosen two unattended if you want civilization to remain civilized! And consider the source... Spike of all people... trying to help Hermione keep order. It can't end well. I picture drunken orgies... Well drunkenness anyway... Buffy is such an entertaining drunk!
hehehe.
Fun
Blue
Comments from author:
lol! Drunken orgies are a definite possibility. At least in Spike's mind. :P Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Review By [DeepBlueJoy] • Date [18 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I guess Spike was useful for something after all! I don't get why Hermione was trying to give away her sock. If I was a house elf I wouldn't want a smelly sock either. At least Buffy and Harry were getting on well :)
Comments from author:
Well, I had her trying to give away the sock in an attempt to forcefully free them. But as another reviewer pointed out, I'd forgotten the tiny fact that only the owner can free an elf - something a school age Hermione didn't know, but a grown one would. Oops! :P Glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]