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Harry Potter and the Wand of Uru

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Review of chapter "The Aftermath p2" from Spica
Review:
This really, Really, REALLY needs to be continued pleaasee!

I almost dropped it due to how the initial parts of chapter 1 made it look almost like a bashfic, but once past that, it became awesome.

I might add that "min herre" does not normally translate to "my lord" but would rather be something like "sir" or maybe "mister". For an easier comparison, "damer och herrar" translates directly as "ladies and gentlemen" while there is no perfect and direct translation of "min herre" to English.
"Herre över X" where X is an area, holding or some such, that´s when it translates as "Lord over/of X".

In fact it gets really troublesome to achieve a good translation of "my lord" over to Scandinavian languages, due to the different histories. If i use "min herre" to refer to someone as a lord, that would translate more properly as "your grace" which translates back "ers nåd" instead...

Just a sidenote because i´m doing much with languages, please ignore it for the purpose of getting the story to GO ON! ^_^
Review By [Spica] • Date [24 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Aftermath p2" from SpacedCadet
Review:
An excellent story.

It would be even better if there were more!

Please update.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rebirthing Now" from Lirana
Review:
Why are his wands gone if he is still wearing the same clothes?
Review By [Lirana] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Aftermath p2" from IronOx
Review:
Glad I found this story, really enjoying it. A little surprised at the way Dumbledore apparently hasn't been manipulating Neville, maybe he feels he doesn't need to?
Review By [IronOx] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Aftermath p2" from SamuraiSky
Review:
Love this story. Any chance of it being continued? Would love to see how things progress and he takes care of You-Know-Who.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Aftermath p2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story!
Love the AU version of Harry's Family and the changes that reverberated.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Aftermath p2" from TinMan
Review:
I can't help but think the transformation would have been of incalculable value I'd he could have kept it a secret.

Oh well. Sometimes Murphy forces your hand.

I honestly can't decide if Harry should be truthful or not. While being caught out lying would be bad, being an adult in a child's body around other kids who are his friends.... I just don't know.
Review By [TinMan] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Samhuinn" from gryphkorval
Review:
Well I must say as much as I enjoyed Harry Potter and the Second Life, and by enjoy I mean count as one of my all time favorites and bug my friends to read it and join me in my enjoyment of you as an author, so there. That being said? The new ten chapters of Wand of Uru are SUPERB, easily better then the same span of story for second life... mind you I keep rereading second life for the sheer awesomeness that is your portrayal of Harry. Here's to me hoping, praying, and perhaps pleading for chapter 11 of your glorious work... if not I'll just have to reread my favorites of yours again. And yes this is the same review I left on ffnet.. but you seem to like this site more so I thought I'd make sure you got my review.
Review By [gryphkorval] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Aftermath p2" from laoshi
Review:
I've got plenty of free time and I'd happily beta any of your stories.
Comments from author:
Well, the missing beta problem is more important insofar as they know what I'm planning to do for four or five years worth of fic. He knows what to watch out for in chapters so I don't mess up what I have planned for future events and end up needing to come back and change stuff.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Aftermath p1" from laoshi
Review:
Harry’s Angels is still a brilliant idea.

Lucius is a right bastard.

And I could read Lily and Narcissa scenes all day long.

I love watching Hermione be embarrassed.
Comments from author:
Lily and Narcissa are yummy. Especially since we sorta cast them as Alicia Witt and Christina Hendricks (well, a black-haired Christina) respectively.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Samhuinn" from laoshi
Review:
I love the way you’re fleshing out Lily’s character. Her train Hobby rocks.

Harry finally using his future knowledge for financial gain.

On Mr and Mrs Li thing. I know you’re short handing by referring to them collectively but when you introduce Su’s mum you could point out Chinese women as a rule keep their last name after they are married.

Heathens indeed. What in Bob’s name are they teaching children these days.

Girl!Harry strikes again eeeexcellent.

Wouldn’t it be funny if a glimpse of Girl!Harry primed the pan for Hermione’s interest in Rose and Jasmine. And come on her dad’s speech was kinda cool.

I appreciate the greater scope of the reactions to Harry’s display this time. Su’s was particularly interesting.

I wonder how the arguments will play out in the next chapter?
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dawn of a New Era" from laoshi
Review:
Is Hermione really the first muggleborn player ever in 1,000 years of Hogwarts history?

Ah the future dreams, really my favourite parts of this story.
Giant Luna Good! Slightly Civil Draco Good! Flora and Hestia Good! Hermione and the Twins Great!

And it’s Luna having them. I did not see that one coming at all. In my head it justifies the whole reboot right here. It’s going to thicken the plot in so many interesting ways starting with Lily investigating Luna. By the way there’s a scene I’d love to see. Harry bringing Tracey and Luna Home to meet Lily and Narcissa. Hint Hint.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "This Time Around" from laoshi
Review:
I always like it when you cross fertilize your fics.

Like Neville or Larry, the answer was a no brainer. Zing!

I’m glad harry has rediscovered the simple joys of magic.

Luna is the coolest girlfriend ever!

If Hermione thinks Harry’s relationship with Tara is weird what must Draco think?

In my book a chapter where Hermione doesn’t punch someone is a wasted opportunity. So thanks for not wasting it.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Settling In" from laoshi
Review:
Hip Hip Hurrah for the Evans Charm. Thank you for providing some concrete evidence that Lily’s charms research had paid off. It’s funny too.

I always enjoy your OC’s. You made the point earlier talking about LBGT. Hogwarts students should accurately reflect the UK population as a whole. Going off the 2001 numbers that would mean of in a class of 40, 33 English kids and 7 from the other three parts of the UK. The fairest would be 4 Scottish students, 2 Welsh Students and 1 Northern Irish Student. Since Gryffindor is a fourth of the class one Scottish Girl and One Welsh girl and One Northern Irish Girl seems pretty reasonable to me.

But then I’m assuming the republic of Ireland has it’s own magical school and Ellen is Northern Irish rather than Irish.

Nobody treats Neville Longbottom like that and gets away with it! So Neville before Neville went to Hogwarts his primary education was at the arched eyebrow and curly mustache school of villainy.

Cherise is still awesome!

I had to look up huldra. You could have also included Yakshini especially since kitsune and huli jing are basically the same thing.

Woohoo women Harry’s not related to.


Isn’t a servant who can teleport a useful thing to have?

Maeve has an interesting strategy against Tara. Giving up so it’s not as fun for her is an idea with potential.

What is up with Snape and lily’s past?

Will there be Vengeance for the Paper Aeroplane Gaff?
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dinner, Deliberations, & Discovery" from dialNforNinja
Review:
Now I know I've mentioned the initial Hannah-as-fiancee thing before, because I remember feeling like a doof for asking about it around the first chapter and then having every subsequent time be Luna, just like now. D'oh.

- dNN
Comments from author:
No problemo. :)
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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