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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Bashing????? Nope that so didn't happen in my humble opinion. Those girls got exactly what they deserved AND asked for you fight smarter and you do a whole lot better then stronger. I love this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm hoping that my muse comes up with some more scenes for this one. ;-)
Review By [twlight] • Date [28 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leb
Review:
this is a good story so far, I hope to read more soon
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story. Any further developments are completely up to my muse's whims. ;-)
Review By [leb] • Date [20 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from loretta
Review:
this is good, i would love to see what will happen next
Comments from author:
Thanks. More if and when my muse decides to tell me. ;-)
Review By [loretta] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Still makes me lol. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and letting me know you liked it. ;-)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
Review:
-snicker- I like that approach; it's certainly not a fair one, but this is the kind of fight where winning counts far more than anything else (assuming anything else really counts). I rather suspect that the three young women are going to definitely reconsider their feelings about Xander after this number; I suspect Giles may do a bit of recalibration, too.
Comments from author:
Well, all I know for sure is that things are most certainly NOT going back to the way they were prior to Xander's challenge to Buffy. ;-)

The ultimate resolution is up to my muse, and she hasn't decided on exactly how things are going to work out, yet.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
ROTFLMAO!
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
Review:
::snicker:: Oh, that's sneaky and underhanded and just what's needed to deal with their various targets. To modify the analogy, there are ways of dealing with army ants, but they don't involve directly killing them but rather by applying suitable chemical means of killing them (or at least diverting them into leaving you alone).
Comments from author:
Well, as the saying goes, "If you ain't cheating, you ain't trying." ;-)

And Xander is trying to point out some rather glaring deficiencies in possible ways to help prevent potential apocalypses. The fact that he's having a great deal of enjoyment while doing so is completely irrelevant to his basic purpose. ;-)
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonwolftiger
Review:
I gotta say I got tired of all the crap that those three girls heaped on Xander after the Fluke. Yeah Cordy got hurt but if you review canon episodes 'She' cheated first. Also Willow was just as much to blame and Xander figured they were going to die anyway. Buffy was just being "Special Girl" and wanting to get Xander out of the way. Great story, please continue.
Comments from author:
I agree with you fully. ;-)

And this version of Cordy deserves to be bitch-slapped until I get tired of watching. And that probably won't last more than three or four hours. ;-)
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [22 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
VERY nicely done.

But Buffy is gonna pull her Cleopatra and when she does, I think things are going to bet.. intense, as in Repo Man intense.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

One thing you need to remember is that this is a crack!fic, so the Rules of Funny always take precedence! ;-)
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [21 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Good use of chemistry
Hoping for more
Comments from author:
There will be more. Just waiting on my muse to tell exactly what it will be.
Review By [LFW] • Date [20 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Moontrap
Review:
Wow. This is a really cool idea. Thank you for letting us read your work, and I can't wait to read more of it.

Sincerely

John

PS I don't know about chemistry, but what about using blessed batteries in a Tazer. I forget where, but some church had something called electric baptism where they wheeled out a car battery, and jumper cables, and zapped you instead of using water. Oh, and mixing holy water with gasoline. Holy water burns, gas ignites, and you turn any super soak-er into a flame thrower.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. More as my muse inspires.
Review By [Moontrap] • Date [20 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from carvell
Review:
Oh bloody hell, I don't think Buffy is going to take this well to losing a deal/bet with Xander and having her lights knocked out, me thinks some payback is in order and with Willow and Cordelia sharing the pain...... boy is Xander going to get it.
Comments from author:
Possibly.

But this is a crack!fic,but remember that the 'Rules Of Funny' always take precedence in those. ;-)
Review By [carvell] • Date [20 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
**evil grin** Me like
Comments from author:
Thanks. What goes around, comes around. ;-)
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [20 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oakheart
Review:
In my little pocket reality, Xander had a pepper spray in his pocket for just such a demonstration. Now that we've negated the possible long-term effects of Formaldehyde... Hilarious!

SD
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [20 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alien
Review:
Mate you are plain evil! Hell will study your texts and use them as learning material :)

Nicely done - good flow, good execution - looking forward to follow up.
Comments from author:
Thanks. My muse can be rather vicious, at times. ;-)
Review By [Alien] • Date [20 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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