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Review of chapter "The Briefing." from twilightwanderer
I will say at the start that I haven't even finished this chapter yet, let alone the story. It looks promising, and I enjoyed the previous stories in this series, so those are points in its favor... BUT-I'd suggest checking your history again. WILLIAM the conqueror of Normandy invaded England in 1066 A.D. (and don't say anything about C.E.), defeated Harold II Godwinson, and established the line of Norman kings. Edward I, Longshanks, Hammer of Scots reigned approximately two hundred years later, and is possibly best known as the opposite number to Scottish leaders such as William Wallace and Robert Bruce. These being two of the most important early kings of England, I'd prefer they be kept straight. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Oops. Yep. My fault. I should have known better, too, since I'm descended from William the Conqueror [on the wrong side of the sheets]. I'll change that.
Review By [twilightwanderer] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bonus Flashbacks." from leelaa
Superb. Just found this fic, and ended up reading it in one go. Loved the concept and the whole fic, but most especially the flashbacks near the end. Thanks so much for a great read. :)
Comments from author:
You're welcome! From the start, I knew I had to have the flashbacks.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bonus Flashbacks." from dreameralways
OK, I have to say that the final Flashbacks chapter just made this story for me. I love that The Council actually had some knowledge about what was going on and actually played everyone else and they never even let the Leverage crew know it either. That was just AWESOME! I'm glad that Faith gets her father back. And it is both slightly disappointing, yet amazing good story telling that in the end, the Leverage crew still has no clue who The Council really are. It lets both universes remain separate thus letting the stories continue on with no major character personality changes necessary.
Thank you so much for writing this story. It was truly amazing.
Comments from author:
One of my goals was to remain true to both universes, and I felt that Leverage learning about the Supernatural would not be doing that. I worked hard to make it fit this way.

Thanks for the love and compliments!
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bonus Flashbacks." from gracerealized
This was absolutely wonderful, the entire set up and the turn around was perfectly Leverage, every voice rang true and to do the flashbacks like they do on the show to explain everything was just right. Great work! I only wish that Buffy had been the one to catch Elliot's eye, I do have a soft spot in my heart for that pairing ... lol

Overall really well thought out and put together.
Good job!
Comments from author:
Thanks! As soon as I knew I was going to write this, I knew I had to do some flashbacks. The bonus ones at the end came to me just after the fight, since I knew Robin was going to be knowing about it from interrogating Elliot.

Sorry, Buffy had other concerns, and Elliot's got a roving eye, so . . . it felt right. Besides, his skill would catch the eye of one he had fought, not someone brought in last minute.

I am trying to come up with a sequel. I would love to get Sterling involved.

After all, Sterling can't lose. Says so in the book.
Review By [gracerealized] • Date [12 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bonus Flashbacks." from HarmMarie
Liked this.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading!
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bonus Flashbacks." from eriktheviking
A great story, well written and the flashbacks worked well in filling out the background storyline happenings.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I knew from the start that I wanted the flashbacks, and I always had a few places they would fit. It was almost a surprise to me, though, when I actually went to do them, how well they worked.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bonus Flashbacks." from batzulger
That's the way I tend to write too. You get this idea and you have to shake it out of your head, Maybe it's the beginning or the end, and you have no idea how it will resolve to that conclusion or proceed from that start until you start typing.

Great story, you did Nate's insane brilliance beautifully and the timing of this with the end of the current TV season made it feel like it was a missing episode.
Comments from author:
Actually, I don't have TV access to the show. I watched it on DVD, and greatly enjoyed it. So, the timing was coincidence!
Review By [batzulger] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bonus Flashbacks." from Jerri
I have very much enjoyed this story. I felt you were true to voice of Leverage and dealt with the intricate convulutions very well. A great read. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I started only a few days after bingeing on the season 3 DVDs.
Review By [Jerri] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bonus Flashbacks." from (Past Donor)Jewel
Excellent and consequentially very enjoyable :D

I also hope you are again inspired by sleep-deprivation...!
Comments from author:
The only other ones I got like that are the White Collor story "The Biggest File" and a couple scenes for a sequel to another story I'm currently stuck on. Until I can finish that story, to start the sequel, I can't get that scene down.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bonus Flashbacks." from Gideon
Great story! You balanced the two shows very well and stayed true to all the characters, which can't have been easy to do. I think the flashbacks worked quite well at the end of the story too. I'm glad it worked out as a happy ending for everyone :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! I was trying to do so. I wanted a happy ending, but I didn't want it to feel overly artificial. And I wanted both sides to be playing at or near the top of their games. Hope I did so.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bonus Flashbacks." from (Current Donor)vidicon
Ah, it seems the Scoobies & co were not nearly as clueless as they appeared to be. That is good. It will be interesting to see how Maggie will be swayed to accept Robin's apologies, though she was not very forthcoming either...

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading.

And Robin is going to have the various offices ship all the artifacts that are non-magically important to Cleveland, for Maggie to go through and sell/donate/maybe set up a museum with.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue." from Gideon
I'm not surprised Buffy wanted to be there at the end. And prison seems to really work for the Lehane family doesn't it? And Hope has a Grandfather!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flashbacks 2." from Gideon
Oh, I like that. See what they can do with a bit of preparation :) And they got to Walle first, that must have been useful.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue." from joshlamont
XD That's... that's so very *wrong*
Comments from author:
What is? That George and Faith were reunited?

Review By [joshlamont] • Date [10 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue." from eriktheviking
A well done reunion but it was a very nice touch with Buffy's surprise arrival bypassing all Hardison's best efforts.
Comments from author:
I was doing my best to be true to both sides' abilties, personalities, and resources. I may have missed somewhere, but I was trying.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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