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Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Making Decisions" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Good story, with lots of potential.

Planning a meteor shower in young Xanders future soon?

Even if he just stays Clarkish this could be a great fic, please continue if you can!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Making Decisions" from djhardim
Review:
Great, hope you find the time to work on this some more.

One correction - The Halloween episode took place in Fall 1997, so the Monday following Halloween was November 3, 1997.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Making Decisions" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
About the “Buffy and Giles don’t mention Jessie” thing. Could it be that since neither of them knew Jessie, they have absolutely nothing to say about him? They probably don’t even think about him since no one ever talks about him? I know I don’t think (much less talk) about people I don’t know or barely met.

P.S. Wow, now I'm hoping I didn't come off as too harsh. I am defiantly enjoying the story, otherwise I wouldn't have written a review. I usually post a thank you, though, and I failed to do so with you. Sorry.

Thank you for the wonderful story.
Comments from author:
It probably could have, and the fact that after Xander had to stake him they might have thought it might help not to mention his name to either him or Willow, Xander is being introspective at a time when even he admits that he needs to sort things out with his own mind as as I mentioned in the author's notes he's not always right and in this instance Xander is not right, except about the thing that it might have been easier on him for just in the aftermath an acknowledgment of what happened. With regards to Jessie Xander is a bit tunneled visioned and he will realize that he is being a bit too harsh on their lack of mentioning him and it probably was too hard for Willow, I did not mean to be too harsh to the characters about this though and I am sorry if it came out as far too harsh. Xander is going to be separating from his friends, but it will be just simple growing apart and growing up, not due to a fight where another character has to take the blame. Xander, Buffy and Willow will equally be growing apart but they will still remain friends but not too close, Buffy and Willow will remain close friends to each other as they did seem closer friends with each other than Xander at most times, though they were close friends to Xander as well except with the fact that there were things namely Angel that Buffy could talk to Willow about but not Xander.

I hope the story wasn't too bad otherwise
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [29 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Making Decisions" from desertcoyote
Review:
There's nothing wrong with a little bashing if it moves the story along. I really enjoyed this chapter and I hope you'll be able to move this story forward!
Review By [desertcoyote] • Date [28 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Making Decisions" from Riniko
Review:
Interesting story idea, Xander only receiving memories and without any of the powers as such, it is still a great upgrade for him. He does need to see things from a better viewpoint than he did. Also, wanted to comment on how well written the story is. I'm sure it will continue to entertain if these first few chapters are an example of what's to come.
Comments from author:
In the next chapter Xander will have gained the powers, like the miniseries its based on he will have the powers but the invulnerability will be different in that he'll be able to cut his hair and it he's powers will slow down and get weaker when he's older if the story continues that long, thank-you I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it continues.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [28 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Making Decisions" from grd
Review:
I enjoy it when Xan gets introspective. Eager to see what changes happen.
Review By [grd] • Date [28 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Making Decisions" from VillageOrchid
Review:
It was a while since the first chapter, so I re-read with this one. The flow went well. Thanks for continuing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Making Decisions" from trongod
Review:
Liking this more thoughtful Xander; the points he made in the chapter are some I had wondered about, so I hope you come up with some answers later from the folks involved. As the camping trip is totally new to this genre, I now wonder why no one else ever had Xander disappear for a time to get his ducks in the general vicinity of a row.

It makes perfect sense, though - he has all these new memories and a more mature outlook to fall back on, so why wouldn't he take the time to acclimatize himself to his new nature? Most authors seem to take the night's events and just gloss over them - except perhaps *Sympathy* by QuickSilver Knight, which I recommend highly - as though they had no affect or as in canon, where they were minimized...

OK, now I have to go back and re read *Sympathy* again...
Review By [trongod] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
Review:
Works for me! :^p
Review By [trongod] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from stonewar
Review:
sounds like an interesting start. I dodn't remember if I actually read that book or simply read about it. Look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank-you I am working on next chapter
Review By [stonewar] • Date [22 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Intriguing.
Comments from author:
Thank-you working on next chapter
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [22 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
Review:
Very nice! Be very interesting to see how far you take this, since there the choices start out as Superman!Xander or Clark Kent!Xander, and expand from there.

In both cases, the after shocks in Xander's life will be profound, and the way they affect his relationships with Willow, Buffy, and Giles - far less Cordelia and the others - will be just as deep. Especially Giles; with Xander's new perspective, I highly doubt the Watcher's past actions - or in actions, I should say - are going to impress the new man that Xander is. Just integrating Clark's memories and experiences into Xander's life will have him far less trusting of Giles and I would think more protective of his girls. While this will hurt Xander, since he has some father figure in Giles, his altered mind will see the rather Buffy absorbed attitude Giles has had to this point.

At this point in time, Giles has still grudgingly "allowed" the two native Sunnydalers to assist HIS Slayer in 'her sacred Calling' without even trying to train them - this despite knowing how deadly the town is, and how much in the cross hairs the actions of the two have put them...

The more I write this, the less I like Giles at all....
Comments from author:
Thank-you for your in depth review, Xander will become more the Clark Kent from the mini series who is also Superman but hopefully still be Xander as well, as Metropolisrising said in his fic a Xander Kent in a way, but not the same, it will be interesting for me to see how close and how far he will be from his costume, by the end of it in different aspects of his life. I am working on the next chapter right now but have no beta at the moment would you like to beta this story? unfortunately my other story has completely stalled and I seem to have permanent writer's block on it at the moment sorry. You are right he will be less trusting of Giles but that will hopefully be a good thing for Xander in the long run.
Review By [trongod] • Date [21 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hanzo
Review:
fantastic
Comments from author:
Thank-you I am working on the next chapter now
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [21 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Zyanadryn
Review:
good start
Comments from author:
Thank-you I am working on next chapter now.
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [21 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
Good beginning. The one thing I would change is your disclaimer. You have five sentences strung together with commas and an 'and' into one sentence.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, hopefully I will be able to have a better disclaimer for the next chapter which I am working on now.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [21 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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