Was wandering through the SG xovers when I found this awesome fic. I love the idea of Ronon and Faith! Adding Ancient tech to the mix was genius. Really hope you get a sequel out at some point.
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
The circumstances of Faith’s escape seemed a bit abrupt- particularly she showed no sign of wanting to leave in canon until she learned that Angelus had returned-, but John and Ronon helping her fend off Caleb definitely made up for that question-mark, and the implications about the First’s connection to the Ancients was VERY interesting (Although I do have to wonder how it could have appeared to Angel after his return from Hell under these conditions; did it take advantage of the dimensional instability that brought him back to Earth, or what?).
So... any chance of a sequel where Faith accompanies the team back to Atlantis?
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great story so far! A few inconsistencies: 1. Caleb never mentioned that he blew up the Council, just that he took them out. Everyone still seems to know though. 2. Chapter 9, no one mentioned the word Turok-Han, but Faith somehow knew its name when speaking to Ronan.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the nitpicking, but I wish you'd make these reviews private. If/when I make the corrections, they'll hang out there like sore thumbs.
They're probably artefacts of the editing process; I took something out and left those statements unsupported without realizing it.
Generally don't read the Stargate/Buffy crossovers, but I was intrigued by your match up of Faith and Ronon. Your plotting and story development were very believable. I liked the bits about Sheppard not seeing the off ramp for Sunnydale and then later being called by the hellmouth. It was a good story all around.
this story was freaking awesome ....I can't believe its over ......I know you have a few sequels in your head *hint*hint* any form of star-gate and Faith is match made in heaven and I would love to see how your Faith meets the universe
Review By [MoonFireStar] • Date [24 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Pretty sure I don't approve of the Seal being Ancient tech.
Is the Pegasus Galaxy far enough, or would it shut down Faith's "extras" Are you going to use the "Some Worlds have Hellmouths and Slayers" setup of a Cordyfan's "A Different Future"?
Comments from author:
I had to have a good excuse to tie the worlds together, didn't I?
I do, in fact, intend to take Faith to Atlantis in the sequel to this, probably a year from now. But I'm pretty sure I'll use my own ideas when I do. =)
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
That is a good way of getting Faith to be elsewhere, and with Shepard arguing that she has to go far away for the sake of Earth she has a good chance of getting accepted. It would do her good to be able to start her fight all over again without her baggage. I wonder if this all means that the scoobies can close the hellmouth permanently without turning Sunnydale into a sinkhole of if that will still happen, just a few years later?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]