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Review of chapter "Linda Kolchak and Seymor cover the Sunnydale High Graduation, 1999" from (Past Donor)Jewel
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Hilarious ending - well done! I can just imagine the poor editor struggling with the inarguable changes to his world view :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [21 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Linda Kolchak and Seymor cover the Sunnydale High Graduation, 1999" from CrystalBlaze
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This is absolutely brilliant!

Cousin Peter--Parker?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

The story ends there of course, but contemplate for a moment a family where Fox Mulder is Mr Boring Normal Guy.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Linda Kolchak and Seymor cover the Sunnydale High Graduation, 1999" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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LOL! Loved it. For once the aspect of demon came in handy.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Point of Divergence" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Faith was scanning for vampires, demons, or Microsoft salesmen. Something about Bill Gates and his firm triggered alarms in her, that was all.

*snicker*

Great first chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of story "Point of Divergence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I read this on XanderZone a while back, just never got around to reviewing. Which is a shame really as this is one of my favorite fics. I actually keep it in my mailbox so I can find it easly when I need a laugh. Well I keep parts 2 and 3. The buildup in part one didn't interest me enough to keep. Although I liked the roses scene, the destruction of the scoobies bothered me. I know it was essential and all but...

I found the quirkyness of your characters to be the best part. And the casual way they discuss the impossible and fully expect a reasonable response gets me every time.

Please I'd love to see another part.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Point of Divergence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Good overall, but one thing bugs me:

you wrote, "Hey I know, we have a cop in the family, a nice normal guy, Uncle Carl’s sister, what’s her name, her son.”

Now, Carl's last name is Kolchak and so is Linda's. If Carl is linda's uncle, then wouldn't his sister be Linda's Aunt?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Point of Divergence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Ok, all I can say is "You'd better have more stories about Xander, Faith and the Kolchack duo, or else I am going to find some books with curses that work!" Wonderful story. I couldn't stop laughing at "Feed me, Seymore." You write well, your plotting is nifty, and I love your versions of Faith and Xander. So how soon will you have their next adventures up? Lol! Thanks for the jolly good entertainment.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Point of Divergence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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OK, this was moderately enjoyable, but I've now read the part in which Xander returns from the dead three times, and I still have no idea how it is supposed to have happened. I think the explanation needs a lot more work.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Point of Divergence" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Thank you! This is a fabulous story, and I enjoyed it very much. Of course, I would enjoy another part, if you have one to write (or already written, or whatever). Fascinating twist with the Mohra demon and the returning from the dead thing. Again, thank you for not only writing this great work, but for placing it on the site so that I could read it. =]
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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