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Review of chapter "chapter three: hope" from Cateagle
Ohh, that's a rather potent kick at the end and I'd love to see a sequel to this one. Methinks Astoria, in the process of writing, has found herself and her strength; this is going to come as a suprise to a lot of folk.
Comments from author:
I am constantly surprised by what comes out of my brain as I write and with Astoria (it might be odd to say) but her growth was so lovely to me. And there are so many stories I should pay attention to but I have just -pages- in a notebook of random idea for this series. It doesn't leave me.

Thank you so much for taking the time to review and for your kind words.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter three: hope" from mountainelements
Just finished reading your series. It's a very interesting take on all of the characters involved, and I love how believable you've made them.
Comments from author:
So delighted to hear that. I try to make all of the characters very human (and so often pull from myself in the writing) and I always firmly believe that even though they live in a magical world doesn't mean their reaction to things wouldn't be the same as anybody else.

Thanks so much for taking the time to review, mountianelements. I love the feedback.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter three: hope" from kalibex
Love that last sentence.
Comments from author:
The last scene was important to me - that it all come full circle to that scene in beginning of the fic on her wedding night.

Always love when people like the little things like that. :) Thanks so much for reviewing, kalibex.
Review By [kalibex] • Date [24 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter three: hope" from Bouquet
I really liked the way you portrayed Astoria in your story. Usually she is either madly in love with Draco since Hogwarts or thze marriage was supposed to be arranged between Draco and Daphne but Draco is more interested in her.

Loved the chapter and can't wait for more stories in your series.
Comments from author:
I actually don't remember ever reading anybody else's portrayal of Astoria - maybe that is why I felt so free to develop my own
*shrug*. I think with a lot of fic (or perhaps just most of what I have read) they just scrap the epilogue - and often times many other points of the final book.

I am delighted you enjoyed how I characterize her though - that was hugely important to me. I needed her to be distant but very real and human.

Thanks so much for reviewing - and I do have more coming up in the series! So happy that you're interested in reading. :)
Review By [Bouquet] • Date [24 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter three: hope" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Wow --- brilliant! I'm actually speechless!
Comments from author:
Thank you zephyrRS, Astoria was very interesting and personal to write for me. I always enjoy background characters because you can extrapolate so much about them from the little bit you are given in a cannon - and with Astoria I did that a lot.

Thanks so much for reviewing. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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