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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from deathgeonous
You seriously need to continue this. Just saying. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
This will be continued. Just not sure when, at the moment.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [25 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Dierdreaes
I must say I have never really been a fan of the Halloween fic but this has caught my attention I do hope you continue it. I do have one tiny little thing to point out though, chaos spell aside, Malificent is a super powerful fairy queen, near goddess level depending on how you look at it, therefore detecting and counteracting spells done on and around her would be considered basic craft for her so assuming you follow the basic premise of the show she should be able to detect what Dawn is with little to no difficulty and perhaps unravel or modify the spell that created her. I think it will be interesting to see if you take that into consideration.
Comments from author:
Yes, Malificent is definitely uber-powerful, but a part of her immense level of power is being supported by the Chaos spell and Janus' power. What happens *after* the spell ends is what's going to determine how things then evolve.

And why would Malificent decide to focus her attention on Dawn, as opposed to all of the other transformed costumed revelers running around town that night?
Review By [Dierdreaes] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Nice; and I always thought that Sinister was one of the more interesting X-Men villains from my days reading Marvel. Of course, anything that has Cordy and Xander involved in XXX situations is always going to get a thumbs up from me! *GRIN*

Looking forward to more of this story

Comments from author:
Yeah, Sinister is a NASTY bastard.

This is gonna have some major repercussions down the line. 0.0
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Zyanadryn
Ooohhhh..... he is such a 'bad' man.....giggle.... looking forward to how much trouble these villians can come up with!!!
Comments from author:
Hmm. In Sunnydale? That would be *LOTS* of trouble!!!! ;-)
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [14 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DarthTenebrus
Keep this going! Xander as Nathan Essex has SO much potential to expand into something more than itself....

Edit/Reply -- like dark fics, do ya? You remember mine? Rise Dark Sisters? Got a part 2, it's called Balance of Powers, and there's a fanart collection I threw together called "Called to Darkness..."; neither one is finished but there's more coming soon ...take a gander and tell your friends!
Comments from author:
All of the costumes are going to have lasting, significant effects on the Scoobies.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Genuka
Oh. I wonder what all will stick around after the spell breaks? *snicker*
Comments from author:
That's always the big question, isn't it? ;-)
Review By [Genuka] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from jormunguard
Good twist on the usual YAHF story. The only negative I could see would be the choice of Big Barda for Willow. I see this as a negative because Barda actually is a hero in the DC universe. It might have been better to have gone with someone like Knockout who was also a member of the Furies and just as strong as Barda, the difference being that Knockout never really became a hero. But I have to say its only a very little negative, it should be interesting to see how you go with this story.
Comments from author:
Barda is a hero *now*.

For years before her conversion, she was the lead on Granny Goodness's hit team, the Female Furies. *That* aspect is the one Willow was emulating with her costume.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CrystalBlaze
Sinny always did like kicking over the anthill, didn't he?
Comments from author:
Yep. And then collecting the ants and experimenting on them, too.

Not a nice guy.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from SaiyaSith
Nice. This story is really fascinating and original. Great job so far!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate your reviewing.
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from LFW
Been awhile for this and I am very happy for more of this fic
I am looking forward to what these three are going to do
Hoping for more soon
Comments from author:
As far as what the Scoobies will do, post-Halloween, my Mystic 8-Ball is saying, 'Things don't look good.' ;-)
Review By [LFW] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from eriktheviking
A great look at a realistic level of evil.
Comments from author:
Yes. None of the costume personalities play well with others. ;-)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from ChikaraKatherine
I laughted so hard once things started up. This so far has been a very fun and enjoyable read. Plot is great. Flows good. Way to kick that twit Jasmine in the shins. Over her future evil plans. Never liked that ep or idea. Just far too plot bunny. Dawns one of the only forces for good. So the world's only hope is an 11 girl. Yep. Wonder if Buffy and Mal can work something out. Willow and Babra might have a chance to get along. After all Willow needs encuragement and a strong personality to help her work out her issues. Babra was not only a fury but defected from them. So she's got strong personality written all over her. Xander has Mr. Sinister in his head, along with the primal sprit. Yep, the boys going to have a few issues after this. Cordy may have gotten off the easiest of anyone in town. Except for having it out with a bigfoot. That couldn't have been fun. Excellent read.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story.

And if the world's survival is depending on Dawn, then it looks like it's boned. ;-)
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [7 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from sunraye
if you are having trouble picking a direction why not pick a good point for a split and write the next part as a seperate story and do both directions after the split in two different storys, it might help the muse to write both sides out.
Comments from author:
That's an intriguing idea, and I might follow it, if and when my muse has any further problems deciding what to do.

I've got the next chapter mostly written, and only have once more section to complete before I'm ready to post it.
Review By [sunraye] • Date [24 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tactless
I was just reading this again and I had the thought that if they did follow guidelines that, though there may be the random death here and there, they would end up with a fairly benevolent tyranny...


...Oh, and Buffy will kill here sister.
Comments from author:
Following the rules would definitely help them succeed in taking over the town, but you also have to remember that Evil doesn't trust other Evil to do anything but try and screw potential competitors over, since that's what they would do in their position. ;-)

So there probably won't be a great deal of cooperation among any of those affected, either while the spell is in effect or after it's been stopped. ;-)

And while most sisters harbor homicidal feelings at various points in their lives, I don't expect Buffy's and Dawn's to be all that much more intense than usual.

At least, not until they each realize what's actually going on. ;-)
Review By [tactless] • Date [31 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Oxnate
Tracked and awaiting more.
Comments from author:
Working on that as my muse's whims dictate. ;-)
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [24 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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