Review of chapter "Sometimes It's Both the Journey and the Destination" from Chikageko
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I'm curious, how do you fancy Giles and Tara teaching wand bearers DADA? Giles may be a genius and an experienced sorcerer and Tara a powerful Pagan Wicca But you've obviously set them up as not having gone to a wand bearers school, so they know none of he magics in the curriculum and while it's entirely likely the two worlds have all of the same creatures recorded in their magic texts they obviously know less than the people they'll be teaching! It's not as if you wrote that Tara had been home schooled in wand bearers magic by her mom, you said she never knew her mom had one! Oversite, hmm?
Comments from author:
This fic was written almost 8 years ago when I was a far less seasoned writer. It's not for everyone. Parts of it, in my opinion, are badly written and there are plot holes. Will I correct this? No. Why? Because it's FANFICTION. It's meant to be fun. I do not take it all that seriously. I save that for my published work. If it bothers you so much that you feel you can not suspend your logical brain for the reading and feel the need to make snarky comments, then don't read me. It's only one story. I'm sure this site has something on it that's your cup of tea.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Begin at the Beginning" from Chikageko
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*Scratches head; looks at authors note, scratches head again* Umm... You do know you've got it wong there right? Willows not gay, never was. She's Bi. Of her four loves two of them were men and both times it was dead serious.
Tara though I'd agree, she's only ever shown any indication of being attracted to girls.
So, Giles is taking umbridges spot in DADA and Bins classes for HoM... I can see the need for teaching assistants for a professor pulling double shifts; there are only 20 class periods a week and to pull all seven years for DADA that's be 2 periods a year for the first 5 years and 1 each for 6th and 7th and HoM it doesn't seem to likely that many people would go newts so I'm unsure if that'd be another 10 periods a week at least posibly 12 which adds up to 22-24 class periods per week. So it's either teaching assistants, 2 seperate teachers of a time turner. heh.
interesting.
Chapter coulda been longer though... *pout*
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "sequel and mature bits pointer" from leelaa
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Absolutely superb.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [22 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "sequel and mature bits pointer" from lucidity
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Great fic!
Review By [lucidity] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "sequel and mature bits pointer" from Dragonelf
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This story was just as excellent as the last time I read it.
::Starts reading the next story in the series::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "sequel and mature bits pointer" from btvsatsbones
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Oh wow! i am lmaoing so hard rite now!! This is the best fanfic I have read in a long time :) Thank u for making my day:)
btvsatsbones
Review By [btvsatsbones] • Date [27 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "sequel and mature bits pointer" from winnie
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I would love to see the continue on with a different sequel that is here. There are so many ways that this could go. Thank you for your work and completing it.
The 2nd paragraph in this chapter was fucking brilliant.
Review By [TheHunter] • Date [9 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Teaching the Teachers" from TheHunter
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OMG the last part was hilarious
Review By [TheHunter] • Date [9 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "sequel and mature bits pointer" from aelfwine
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It's been a long time since I enjoyed any story this much. I've stayed up till the wee hours of the morning reading this and am now in the middle of the sequel. This story has everything I could possibly want: Love, angst, humor, sorrow, and a healthy helping of sexiness. Having seen now how well you write I intend to start reading the rest of your work!
Review By [aelfwine] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "sequel and mature bits pointer" from Dragonelf
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Excellent story. I have just started to reread this series.
::Continues reading the series::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "sequel and mature bits pointer" from christytrekkie
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I love this story. I laughed my ass off in this. the pairings are a little strange though. I love that you made Remus Tara's father. I thought to my complete horror that you were gonna hook Giles with Minerva. I actually almost gagged at that, thank the PTB you didn't though thank you. I was a little disturbed by the Snape/willow pairing but got through it. Buffy/Oliver I'm still questioning it seems like another Buffy/Riley situation to me you'll have to convince me a bit more on this pairing. the whole Harry/Dawn seemed a bit predictable a bit overdone in fanfic I'm afraid but still likable.Ginny/Draco priceless. overall I love this story.
Review By [christytrekkie] • Date [3 Oct 08] • Not Rated