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Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Great story.

Want more.

NOW!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from (Current Donor)Truthmaker
Review:
This is a wonderful story, I love the way you write both Joyce and Jack.

I'm guessing this story is over with, you've reached a natural denouement. Is there any chance for a sequel?
Review By [(Current Donor)Truthmaker] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Ember
Review:
This story has almost everyone I've always wanted to throw together and make into a big crazy, confusing family unit. Well done! I know its been a long time since an update has appeared but I hope that someday you intend to finish this.
Review By [Ember] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah, this was great as always. And I still do hope for more. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from SpacedCadet
Review:
It's been a year.

Time, and past time, to update!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from shadowflame
Review:
Okay, general: awesome job so far, please keep it up! You've somehow written a fic that should probably have ended up a Mary-Sue, but isn't, and instead effectively communicates Joyce's panic at what will/could happen, worry about the kids (all of them...) and, prior to this chapter, space (although 11 kids, plus Meredith, plus eventually Kendra & Tera, and plus Amy and Jonathan in a save them a couch or cot sort of way--and why do I feel that Joyce's offer to Larry will come back?--but that's definitely 12, as soon as they can get Kendra and Tera 14, and if we include Amy and Jonathan 16, how are they going to fit in 10 bedrooms! Joyce herself said Willow was the least territorial apart from Dawn, and there was an age difference that would make Dawn and Meredith sharing weird, and to my understanding, there's no other girl close to Dawn's age...(Although Kendra is younger than the main Scoobies...)...!), and aliens/SGC shenanigans; YET also show her optimism/determination to survive if not thrive/what-have-you..so good job.
Although...the ages....how do the ages WORK?
Buffy, Xander, and Willow are triplets, in that order, and are Juniors, so 17?
Cordy, adopted, is the same age--that works.
Faith, also adopted--does canon ever give her an age? Or did you make her the same as B/X/W/C? Or one or two below?
Oz--canon he's a grade above initially, then repeats Senior year with the others; so.. Senior/18 abouts?
Harry, Conner, and Chris are also triplets, and in High school---so are they also Hank's? Or did Joyce adopt all 3 of them? Cause she's only been married to Jack for 7 years... But that still leaves either Freshmen or Sophomores as possibilities (huh, that's narrower than a thought...yay..)
Dawn is 12; okay, easy, Joyce and Hank's biological child.
Sirius... is the youngest? Or is he Dawn's twin? Since there was the splitting the key thing? Huh, actually that makes sense...

Huh. The ages make more sense than I realized......yeah, I'm a stickler for detail on that sort of thing...
Review By [shadowflame] • Date [26 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from shadowflame
Review:
"If hugs, hot chocolate, and memories that weren’t technically hers were all she had to change this world then, by God, she was going to use them to the best of her ability."
I can't say how much I love that line; it (and Joyce's) dedication to making the best out of an at best weird, and at worst downright bad situation is inspiring (and amusingly phrased), and just in general helpful with dealing with my own weird/bad/strange situation. Thanks for the unintentional pick-me-up?
Review By [shadowflame] • Date [26 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Addlcove
Review:
an entertaining read, hope you decide to continue it at some point.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from (Past Donor)Aynot
Review:
I love this story I hope that you are able and will continue it.

...and what my emotions wanted to say: "MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! ...Please!?!"
Review By [(Past Donor)Aynot] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from dragondawn
Review:
I really like this story I hope you start writing it again.
Review By [dragondawn] • Date [10 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Stationary
Review:
well im just glad to see you get back to writing this wonderful story! i love how well you've mixed all the fandoms up, even though i don't recognize one of them--abbey? is that from west wing or something?
Review By [Stationary] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from calikocat
Review:
I don't usually read Joyce centered fics...but this is really awesome. ^^ And I'm glad she didn't kill Spike.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from deathgeonous
Review:
Decided I really need to rec this one after recing those others of yours, because, yeah, this is probably your best work and my favorite of yours. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Hi!

Just finished reading this and I'm very impressed. It is both well written and very engaging. I love the AU aspect, though I do wonder if events here are somehow impacting events back in the Buffyverse, since Joyce lived on there for several more months after the surgery, or if this is a clean break.

I'm also enjoying the relocation from Sunnydale to Colorado Springs, though it does make me wonder if this universe's hellmouth is in CS since events seem to be tracking along as if it is.

One thing I thought could have used a bit more expansion was Giles saying Chappa'ai in front of the SGC people. His use of that word would have caused an instant 'Goa'uld infiltrator' response from most SGC personnel.

All that said, I'm tracking this in the fervently prayed (and wished) hope that this story is continued.

hmm
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah, now this is a very fun fic. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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