I don't usually read Joyce centered fics...but this is really awesome. ^^ And I'm glad she didn't kill Spike.

Decided I really need to rec this one after recing those others of yours, because, yeah, this is probably your best work and my favorite of yours. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Hi!

Just finished reading this and I'm very impressed. It is both well written and very engaging. I love the AU aspect, though I do wonder if events here are somehow impacting events back in the Buffyverse, since Joyce lived on there for several more months after the surgery, or if this is a clean break.

I'm also enjoying the relocation from Sunnydale to Colorado Springs, though it does make me wonder if this universe's hellmouth is in CS since events seem to be tracking along as if it is.

One thing I thought could have used a bit more expansion was Giles saying Chappa'ai in front of the SGC people. His use of that word would have caused an instant 'Goa'uld infiltrator' response from most SGC personnel.

All that said, I'm tracking this in the fervently prayed (and wished) hope that this story is continued.

hmm

Ah, now this is a very fun fic. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Hey, first off great story, and great chapter. Secondly if you don't do well interacting, then just interact through your stories. Don't sweat the small stuff (and it's ALL small stuff) just relax and turn out chapters when they come to you. Remember that if you don't enjoy the writing, readers can tell and we can also tell that you do enjoy what you do (at least I think so) so just enjoy writing as much as we enjoy reading your writing and take your time turning out chapters.

This story is wonderful!!! I hope you update it soon!!!

If you ever rewrite the story, try and leave Chris, Sirius and Harry out. They are currently just filler persons, which do not contribute to the story. You even might want to leave all references to Rowling's wand wielder universe and/or the Charmed universe out.

You also might want to leave Meredith, Ellis and Abbey out, but that would depend on the sub story about Meredith.


I am very interested in how the main story part with Joyce having some knowledge about what might come works out. Especially with the cloud of a brain tumor hanging over her, and the large probability of her dying on it or its complications.

Regards

Great chaps and story, brilliant interactions, hope Jon and Jack can get along ok, What is Jon considered legally by the school, nephew, foster or son?, please update soon, what ages are all the characters?

Another cookie of fiction-y goodness! Yayy!

Just spent the last three days re-re-reading all your stories, and they were just as awesome as I remembered. You said "I just suck at interacting with people sometimes", Doesn't everyone? I swear the next generation will all work from home and interact over technology only we are a socially awkward society ... Anyway I love this story I love the xover btw the different tv series. Um this is just a question but would it be a possibility if a Btvs/Teen wolf xover??? With Xander as a main character??? If not that's ok but those two series are like made for each other and I haven't found any that are awesome yet and you kind of make every character awesome so ..... Well anyway hoping for more of any update really !!!! Thnx

Loved the story. Surprized to see the cheaper by the dozen house. Keep up the good work.

Love this story!!! I hope your life stays sane and you can continue to write. Please keep up the awesomeness!

Wonderful chapters!

This is wonderful. I hope that your hiatus wasn't because of something bad happening to you or your loved ones. I'm glad you're back.

Love ya

So now they have the house that they need to have room for everyone and all their secrets have been shared. Now they just need to worry about what might actually happen! There is always the possibility that some problems could come from one of the other dimensions and catch even Joyce by surprise!