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Review of chapter "Chappa'ier 3" from RainbowCubes
Review:
I have a slight issue with this. There is no regulation haircut for the Air Force. For women it is expected that they will have long hair tied neatly and for men as long as it's not too long (like Daniel season 1 & 2) it's fine.
Comments from author:
Eh, You could imagine it was Xander's doing. Ever seen Police Academy? The pair of idiots went in "we're first", got it all off, then the jigalo went and had it trimmed, and the barber was like, "This aint the army."


Same thing here, if you want. Xander could have got it as a "Think of it as, a new start, a new hairdo."
Review By [RainbowCubes] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chappa'ier 4" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
I enjoyed this. It's light, but with just enough dark to keep it interesting. It's got some of my fave characters and interesting things happen.

Nicely done.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chappa'ier 4" from EasterCat
Review:
The story seems like it has a lot of promise. A good re-write would help.
Comments from author:
yep. a rewrite would help. or a good write. (it's the rough draft.)
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chappa'ier 4" from serenityselena
Review:
awesome story with some interesting twists ^_^

Happy New Year!!!
Comments from author:
oops, missed this review to reply to. >.<

so here I am.

Thanks, and here's to the 2-3 weeks of January that have already passed without prob... well. almost without problem. (ack, Flu made me loose 1 stone in a WEEK. But then I wanted to loose wait, but it was can't-work-no-energy hence why I managed these fics.)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chappa'ier 1" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Dialog good, narrative a bit rushed to follow properly.
Comments from author:
thanks, and it's basically the rough drafts that I uploaded, so the narrative is rushed. you should have seen how it was before I corrected most of the errors. (some still there.)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Teaser" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I liked the idea of Wesley and Faith going to Denver. I'm not so sure about a boyfriend teaching a girlfriend how to fight. It's hard to compartmentalize.... but not impossible. So we'll just allow for Xander to be able to do that, considering his home life and upbringing. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
With Xander and Cordy?... I could see it (the struggle to compartmentalize) if the fic was a Xander/Willow pairing with Xander trying to teach willow, but with Cordy... eh, I can totally see him able to compartmentalize, and that it's actually a strength for those two.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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