Review of chapter "Chappa'ier 3" from RainbowCubes
Review:
I have a slight issue with this. There is no regulation haircut for the Air Force. For women it is expected that they will have long hair tied neatly and for men as long as it's not too long (like Daniel season 1 & 2) it's fine.
Comments from author:
Eh, You could imagine it was Xander's doing. Ever seen Police Academy? The pair of idiots went in "we're first", got it all off, then the jigalo went and had it trimmed, and the barber was like, "This aint the army."
Same thing here, if you want. Xander could have got it as a "Think of it as, a new start, a new hairdo."
Review By [RainbowCubes] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Thanks, and here's to the 2-3 weeks of January that have already passed without prob... well. almost without problem. (ack, Flu made me loose 1 stone in a WEEK. But then I wanted to loose wait, but it was can't-work-no-energy hence why I managed these fics.)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Dialog good, narrative a bit rushed to follow properly.
Comments from author:
thanks, and it's basically the rough drafts that I uploaded, so the narrative is rushed. you should have seen how it was before I corrected most of the errors. (some still there.)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
I liked the idea of Wesley and Faith going to Denver. I'm not so sure about a boyfriend teaching a girlfriend how to fight. It's hard to compartmentalize.... but not impossible. So we'll just allow for Xander to be able to do that, considering his home life and upbringing. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
With Xander and Cordy?... I could see it (the struggle to compartmentalize) if the fic was a Xander/Willow pairing with Xander trying to teach willow, but with Cordy... eh, I can totally see him able to compartmentalize, and that it's actually a strength for those two.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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