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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nemmodo
Review:
This introduction would make a great story. Especially if both lines are continued for a bit until eventually merging both back together.

I look forward to seeing it continue.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [nemmodo] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
An interesting set-up.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
Review:
Definitely different; will be looking forward to seeing just how Xander got swept away to a galaxy far, far away... Come to that, is 'Star Wars' in existence in his old Reality that as his memory starts creeping back, he starts warning his comrades of up coming events? Or does his memory come back at all?

Either way would be intriguing; can he slow down - doubt he could actually stop what's coming - but can he alter the future enough to save more than the movies/books let live... Especially the children, which would be a major driving force as his memory returned.

If his memory doesn't come back but for flashes and hints, what happens when he gets tossed back into his former Reality and the Scoobies try to contact the new 'threat' on the Hellmouth? Sooner or later, his armor has to come off and his now-recognizable features would create quite a bit of chaos, along with his continued flashes of the shy redhead girl changing their relationship...
Review By [trongod] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Good beginning. Cannot wait to see more.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
A novel idea, question - how is this going to effect the star wars verse? As having a trooper that isn't order 66 indoctrinated may have consequences. On a side note have you played the game Knights of the Old Republic (KOTOR)? or its sequel Knights of the Old Republic:the Sith Lords? as either introducing HK-47 or a reprogrammed HK-50 droid into this story would add a dash of humor. Also which version of the clone wars is this going to follow?

Anyway in thanks for this - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PxOoapCsD1w
Comments from author:
No I havent played KOTOR, this story will take elements from the Clone Wars TV series and Karen Travis's 'Republic Commando' books. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review.
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Omegaprime
Review:
Ok, now I'm interested.

Now I'm just wondering how both dimensions adjust to Xander not being there and Zander being in the Star Wars universe.

What will Buffy do when Xander isn't there?

Keep up the good work
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. As for Buffy & Co, later chapters will show how she deals without her 'Xander Shaped Friend'.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Good start, how far ahead have you thought out this piece? Lots of room for development here, yes a good start indeed.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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