This is a great story too, but maybe leave it until you finish Ursa first :) I'm glad Buffy remembers or has learned how to speak, it shows she still has some memory of humanity.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I've been looking into as many of these types of stories as I can find lately. So far, this is looking like it might be one of the better ones. Nicely done. Keep up the good work!
Review By [darkwoofe] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
wow a story in this fandom that seem recent. maybe it will not be unfinished like many other. it would be a shame. it's a good start and i certainly wouldn't mind to read more of it.
Good to see you writing an Honorverse story. The only good Honorverse story so far has been Honor's Slayer but I suspect yours will make two good stories. It's a good start and I would really like to read the first meeting between "summer" and Honor. Hope it's soon.
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [wizathogwarts] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Excellent start. I love a good Honnorverse cross and this looks like another good one. So many questions... I hope you update soon so we all find out what the frak is going on with Buffy. Lol!
Comments from author:
if you look at my profile I have an email address you can use to ask questions. of course, I may not answer them if I feel it gives away too much or if its something I haven't worked out yet. I will do my best to respond, though!
An interesting premise, and pretty well-written. As I recall, one of the reasons the Peeps chose Hades for their prison was the fact that the native food wasn't edible by humans; the only food that was edible was grown by the Peeps on their terraformed island. If anyone rebelled, the Peeps could stop the rebellion by cutting off the food supply. Therefore, it's unlikely that Buffy has been on the planet for thousands of years - she'd not only have to be immune to aging but also to starvation (unless she's been stealing from the Peeps the whole time).
Comments from author:
Luckily this is a fantasy/sci-fi genre. I'm going with the premise that buffy can eat local food without problems.
thanks for the compliment! writing in the honorverse is incredibly difficult - there's just so much stuff involved. I have pages and pages of notes about characters, ranks, personalities (for minor characters), dates, weapons, etc. Hearing that I wrote it pretty well is great!
Review By [Rich] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
She might not have been there for millennia--could have been a portal through time as well as dimensions. Your choice of course. After that long a time, how much would she even remember? Ouch. Interesting to think when in her career it happened--- end of S2 Acathla portal; end of s5 & Dawn's...or even somewhat later. "about 20" in appearance...hm... Anyway, I like Buffy/Honor crossovers and she'd certainly be useful in taking over the planet. But after that, not so much - no education in all the things 'everyone knows' in that era, not much use in space battles... Great for undercover / commando missions or bodyguard work, of course. Any bioscan would puzzle people --she isn't genetically modified (unless getting Chosen does that?)... hm, oddly enough she'd culturally be closer to the Graysons than Manticorans (aside from the whole patriarchal thing). Who knows maybe in the 20th century she once met some of the people who later on went on to found Grayson? Ancestors of anyway. I can see it now: Chantarelle helped form the group.
Comments from author:
anything "remembered" that far back would likely be legend, even if they had records. Think about what we know about the people who lived 2000 years ago, even with written accounts.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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