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The Difference The One Who Sees Makes

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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from spacey
Review:
Interesting. I'm glad I finally read the update. Hope Lucifer has some interesting things to say to xander!
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. I've got a few ideas for what happens when Xander meets Lucifer. But you'll have to wait to find out...
Hugs! Ms Sunshine
Review By [spacey] • Date [18 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Eureka
Review:
Good chappie! Hope u don't get too discouraged.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. Hugs, Ms Sunshine
Review By [Eureka] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Heh! That would certainly explain the attraction, neh?
Comments from author:
Yeah... Poor Xander, always falling for the Slayer. ;) Hugs. Thanks for your review. Ms Sunshine
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from SnakeFox
Review:
Great new chapter! I thought the fake out of having them be outside the building was very well done. Even if that's the only "difference The One Who Sees makes", I'm glad, never thought they should've been killed off!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. I struggled with the fake out for forever, trying to word it just right so that people couldn't guess at what I was doing. I've couple ideas for other things that "the difference" could apply to, but I'm not telling yet. Thanks so much for your review. Hugs, Ms Sunshine
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Kirallie
Review:
Yay you didn't have them die in the blast!!!! Sam didn't even thank Xander? How rude.
Comments from author:
I know, I totally gave in and let them surrive the bombing. I do have an idea brewing in the back of my mind to explain Sam's general grouchiness, but I'm not sharing just yet. Hugs and thanks for your review! Ms Sunshine
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from lorwen
Review:
great story!
hope you continue!
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [16 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Yodes
Review:
Can't wait to see how Xander changes everything.
Review By [Yodes] • Date [4 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from SarahLou
Review:
So glad to see this still going! Love this chapter, and I'm definitely on the side of Jo and Ellen surviving :-)
Comments from author:
I'm happy that your enjoying my writing. Thanks for your review and opinion. Hugs, Ms Sunshine
Review By [SarahLou] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from jimmyc
Review:
good story so far, ellen and jo should definitely live if only for jo to wind up dean with xander
Comments from author:
Thanks! For both the review and your opinion. Hugs, Ms Sunshine
Review By [jimmyc] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
i really want them to live please
Comments from author:
Thanks for your opinion and review. Hugs, Ms Sunshine
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Hmmmmm.....i vote die as much as that pains me. Xander has a vengance streak a continent wide when it comes to his girls. And I do believe jo and ellen are two of his girls. Despite the decade long absence in each others lives.
Comments from author:
Yes, Xander does tend to go a little crazy whenever someone hurts anyone that he considers his. And Jo and Ellen are most deffinitely his. Thanks for your opinion and review. Hugs, Ms Sunshine
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Kirallie
Review:
Is Jo a Slayer maybe? That why she could see the hounds? Figure Xander can since he has gifts. if she is a Slayer then she could heal that injury relatively fast right? So where is Cas?
Comments from author:
I'm not gunna answer most of your questions, cause that would give away too much. But about Cas, I'm keeping with canon. After he went to investigate the reaper presence in town, he was captured by Lucifer. I glossed over his abduction because no matter how I wrote that in, all I seemed to be doing was quoting the episode and slowing down the story. Thanks so much for your review. Hugs, Ms Sunshine
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from lilykep
Review:
Please don't kill them. I love Ellen and Jo, and their death almost breaks the boys.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your opinion and review. Hugs, Ms Sunshine
Review By [lilykep] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written alternative to canon with no easy fixes in sight.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Compliments like yours are always greatly appreciated. Hugs, Ms Sunshine
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Rorschach
Review:
i think that they should live
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review and opinion. Hugs, Ms Sunshine
Review By [Rorschach] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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