I liked how you were aware of the timing change for the other characters, and they were not in the same place/position as there were in the episode when the spell ended.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Oh, I liked this story of yours. I hope there eventually will be more stories and that Jenny kept some of WW's powers. If Angelus ever shows up, he will get SUCH a suprise when he tries to kill Jenny. Lol!
Excellent, especially the fall out on Wonder Woman's side. I can't see her allowing such a small and relatively weak - not to mention incredibly young - group go on safe girding such a deadly area unassisted... And if Dr. Fate and some others can help, maybe they won't have to.
There's a number of crossovers where the Scoobies get sucked into the DC 'Verse, and a /very/ small number where the reverse occurs, so maybe your Muses can add to this????
Excellent story! My only complaint was why couldn't she have kept the powers after the spell had ended. For one thing it would change everything such as her dying a few months later and preventing Angel from losing his soul or otherwise kill him since Buffy never had the guts to do it. With Jenny protecting the Hellmouth, Glory would have been toast the first time they met. Oh how I would love to see that. Hope this inspires you to continue this. Keep writing and take care.
Review By [Knightmare] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Larry's name is Blaisdale. And how the heck did Ethan get free within seconds of the spell reverting, considering he was hanging in mid-air, arms bound to his sides and the lasso remained undamaged?
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Not Rated
I say "YES!!!" on followup stories. This has the makings of a good series if you let it. Though let it be more than oneshots though. One shots are nice, but I like seeing a story fleshed out showing how the characters progress thoughout the story.
Comments from author:
Follow up stories may appear in the future but at the moment I'm concentrating more on my other fics. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Review By [SkeeterB] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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