Good story, only two questions though is the Alice your using modeled off of Alice Liddel from American McGee's Alice and was Helena Ravenclaw named for Lady Helena (at least in your story)?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review Aenea,
Actually no. Alice is basically Girlycard from 'Hellsing: Dawn' (the WW2 Era) becoming an independent character instead of being an avatar of Alucard. The name was chosen because of its etymology, meaning 'of noble race'
Helena is likewise a character from Hellsing, though only present in the TV series (where she is killed by Incognito). She is presented there as an old British vampire. Her relations with Hogwart's Founders is something I will have to develop upon.
Going by what was said in this chapter, I take it that the world is a very different place? Does the world at large know about the "supernartual"?
And whats this "Dawnbringer"? Hhmmm......Blade?XD
Anyway, looking forward to more! Keep up the great work and good luck.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, Robby,
For your first question, yes, the world is a very different place. I don't want to spoil too much, but you can already guess from what's already said that the Drake family actually took the place of the Hellsing Organization.
For Dawnbringer, no it's not Blade, though I think I see what would be similar in that series. Here, the word 'Outbreak' associated with the name 'Dawnbringer' can let you guess what it was and what it was supposed to do as it affected vampires.
Review By [Robby] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]