very good

needs fleshing out, all of my stories do.

Well...that was certainly a new take on things relating to Angel being cursed and sent off to a Hell dimension. Though I do wonder how things are going to go if Dawn's birth is once again something drummed up by the Order of Dagon...

Awesome, in any case!

nope. dawn aka the key, yes. fake memories, nay. They found out that they couldn't modify the memories of one of them and realised the inherent dangers of running with the original plan of making the key buffy's sister, and switch to making her her daughter. more than one got away, as making it so that the only change was a bust condom a few months prior, instead of years and years prior and loads of fake memories and modifying a house... as for the no modifying peoples' memory to make them already aware of her pregnancy? she 'hid it.' Then again, the monks will have done this and made dawn a foetus at the point where it would have only started to be noticable. (barely a bump.)