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Review of chapter "The Heroine" from sdavidm
Review:
I like the cross, and this was well written, but the Bones cast didn't really do much in the end.
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [22 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Very moving and very disturbing. Very glad that Booth wasn't Angel. Really got tired of that.

Very well done.

Blue.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Wow. Potent, beautiful story. Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very good!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Very heartwarming piece!!! And well written!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story ^_^
Comments from author:
thanks :)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [10 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
This was a pretty good one-shot. A rather well done meshing of the two shows.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Getting these two shows to click is harder than I thought it would be.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [10 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from Caliadragon
Review:
This was so sad. I feel for the group for having done their best to overcome the horror that Travers inflicted on the girls in the past, only for him to come back and kill more of them. I also love that you didn't make Booth immediately be Angel or something like that. I liked that it was Booth that sent the soldiers back to their rest and the way that Bones was his comfort.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Yeah, this just didn't want to be a happy story. I always hated Travers. Getting blown up was too good for him. I get annoyed when Booth is Angel. Because they're such different characters, ya know? Oh, Bones.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [9 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from AllenPitt
Review:
Great story... but how come Xander & others never did a "hey you look a lot like Angel!" to Booth?
Comments from author:
Thanks....Xander knows. There's little hints scattered throughout, but I didn't want to make it overt. Also, what are the odds that, if the Council has enough pull to stop an investigation, that they're not going to know (with pictures) who is in charge of it? Yeah, Xander knew.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from msdarque
Review:
Such a sad but great story. Wonderfully written.
Congrats!
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [9 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from grd
Review:
Beautiful. Hope you do more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. This story is done, honestly, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [grd] • Date [9 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Worth a little bit of expansion. I didn't quite understand how it was that Booth closed the circle or who Shannon was.

Also:

alibi with a bit of wobbling.

While alibi is a real word, I think you meant albeit which is an archaic shortening of all be it (I think).
Comments from author:
Booth doesn't really understand, either. It's because he made the last kill and Travers landed just about where the 13 girl would have gone. Shannon is a canon character. She's a Slayer. (http://buffy.wikia.com/wiki/Shannon)

I changed it. Thanks for the heads up.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from (Past Donor)HiltonK
Review:
Very good, nice mesh of the two verses.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you like it.
Review By [(Past Donor)HiltonK] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from Gideon
Review:
Wow, a whole story in one chapter! The plot was good and the story was well written but I felt it was a bit rushed in places. We don't find out how Quentin and his friends became zombies or why they wanted an undead army? Also how did everyone get back to the cemetery at the end? I was a bit confused when they all suddenly appeared there. Maybe another chapter would have benefited the clarity of your story. It was very sad that so many Slayers died though, Xander and the others must have been going insane when one disappeared every month. I'm not clear on why the Bones team were needed though, their investigation didn't seem to provide anything the scoobies didn't already know except the location of the bodies. In a longer story you could have used the bones or their surroundings to lead everyone to another location where Quentin and his buddies were holed up or maybe where they were performing the spell. It would also have allowed some time to explore how the squints reacted to the revelations of magic and the supernatural which there was not time to cover in one chapter.
Comments from author:
Yeah, it was a wild ride. Quentin and the other guys with him weren't zombies. They were raising zombies. They were supposed to be dead, because of the explosion, but must have gotten out of it somehow. They drove? Just like Booth? And I *could* do a lot of things, but I'm happy with the story as it is.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from ebony
Review:
Very sad.
Comments from author:
Yeah.
Review By [ebony] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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