Review of chapter "Another Night" from
SanchanReview:
Simple well done here...
Na, there is one thing I really, really have to criticize: Why did you stop there???? It was just getting interesting / juicy, and you just stopped!!! OK, probably the rating of PG-13 should have told me something... but well I was just getting into it and then....
Just ignore my whining, it was a nice litte storry, and I liked it!
Bye
Sanchan
Comments from author:
Well, some things are better left to the imagination, don't you think? Anyway, I'm not one to shy away from unexpected sequels, so there's still a chance I'll continue this one day.
I'm glad you liked the story despite its shortness. Thanks for reviewing. It's much appreciated.
Review By [
Sanchan] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Another Night" from
lothlorienReview:
A random story? Where did this come from? It's lovely though. I could totally see Dom throwing the race - he wins either way :P
Comments from author:
It came from a challenge at corrupted_smile, actually. It's under the subject title "Meme: Never Will I Ever" amongst the messages. Check it out, if you haven't already. ^_^
Did he or didn't he lose on purpose? That's the question.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [
lothlorien] • Date [10 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
