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WolfWriter Review:
Personally, I hate Twinkies. I've always been more of a cupcake and fruit pie kind of gal. This was one messed up, funny story. I liked it. Maybe he can switch to Little Debbie's?
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WolfWriter ] • Date [24 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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dogbertcarrollReview:
Meh.
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dogbertcarroll] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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jujukittychick Review:
*Dies laughing* feels dirty indeed. that was really cute. poor xander, his whole reason to fight gone in an instant lmao too funny :)
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jujukittychick ] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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Duskie Review:
I enjoyed that greatly, poor heart broken Xander. I think Xander needs to move to Canada. Apparently Hostess Canada is fine.
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Duskie ] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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BrownFinderth Review:
Had the girls more than snuggled with Xander?!??? Please! Perhaps I'm too dense today to understand!!!
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BrownFinderth ] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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Gideon Review:
I think Xander is more broken than he realises. He should be savouring this moment and retelling it to all comers at every opportunity :)
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Gideon ] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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eriktheviking Review:
I feel so cheated. Great fun, thanks.
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eriktheviking ] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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EllandrahSylver Review:
Oh dear lord! *laughs* This was great. vidicon--> New meaning? Really? Because whipped cream and... Never mind... *smirks*
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EllandrahSylver ] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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vidiconReview:
That opens a number of possibilities that I do not want to contemplate and also gives a whole new meaning to the use of whipped cream, syrup and vanilla...
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vidicon] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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msdarque Review:
Wow.. brilliant! :D Congrats!
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msdarque ] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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EdBecerra Review:
He had a wet dream. About Twinkies. Ooooooooooo-kay. I'm so not going to think about that too deeply, or I might go insane. Seeing-Cthulu-level-insane. Ed Becerra
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EdBecerra ] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Not Rated