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Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from leb
Review:
I love this story, please update it soon
Review By [leb] • Date [15 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from leb
Review:
Please update soon
Review By [leb] • Date [26 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from iroshi
Review:
I really love your writing. It's hilarious, well written, and without the kind of annoying grammar mistakes that jerk me out of the story. ^_^ My only wish is that you wrote longer stories. Don't get me wrong; I love your little gems. I just love your characters enough that I wish I could read full stories with them! This is me, pouting. :(

Anyway, keep up the great work, and I look forward to the latest gems your muse leaves lying around. (Thankfully Harry Potter is one of my two favorite fandoms -obviously BtVS is the other, especially Xander-centered!- so I'm enjoying your latest foray into multi-chaptered stories. :)
Review By [iroshi] • Date [3 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from serenityselena
Review:
a really entertaining story...
hope you will continue it :)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [31 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from gaulty
Review:
Good chapter, bye
Review By [gaulty] • Date [13 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Certainly ain't boring!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [11 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from Twillightfairy
Review:
This has made me laugh with all the differences from canon, I love the fact that instead of Fred being possessed and lost Dru and Miss Edith were possessed and stayed along with Illyria in one body. The phone conversations are also different from any/most I've seen before and much more real from an outsiders perspective.
Comments from author:
yeah, usually those type are written from the "how can we freak out the readers" thing, "how to make it sound funny" or just from the "we wrote both, then deleted one side of it".


I tried to do it with all three :P
Review By [Twillightfairy] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
Review:
This is one of the funniest things I've ever read!
Comments from author:
Thanks. There's not much stuff out there that gets giggles from me everytime I read them, but I hope this is on par. (probably not)
Review By [Bill] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Woot.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from trongod
Review:
I thank you kindly for the most recent chapters, and I hope to see Angelus run into Harry and jack in the near future... preferably with Xander eating popcorn with Dawn while Buffy and Cordelia do the 'But he can be saved' lament to deaf ears all around.

Loved the winter events hitting Hell, but I'm wondering who the other parties were besides Jack and Harry... And if they had acquaintance with Xander as well?

Keep it, O Great And Gracious One!
Comments from author:
oddly enough, my background for fanfiction being Harry Potter, I still pause when I see 'Harry'. It's why the title is 'Xander, Jack, Maybourne' and not 'Xander, Jack, Harry', even though that one is all first names. unfortunately, I just dont ever do it the other way around for HP - if I put potter, I'm sure enough putting 'verse' tacked onto the end and talking about that franchise or whatever, rather than Harry Potter in particular.

hmm, sidetracked a moment there. Anyway.

Buffy would be, Cordelia wouldn't take much convincing.

Only in growing distance,... if that made sense. all connected to together in a chain of 'If these two agree, then next so and so will on something too.' so the chances of Xander knowing the last lot are slim to none, versus probable for whatever pair was referenced when Jack and Maybourne agreed and realised they agreed. (key point: they both realise they agree on something and are freaked out by that, followed by saying the same things together in that way that fiction likes to call 'twin speak'.)
Review By [trongod] • Date [16 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
not really, but thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Why Maggie Walsh Hates Xander Harris." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Glad that this lead to some Au-ey goodness in regards to the Adam part of the story. I'd like the story better, if you actually wrote more of it out instead of outlining it.
Comments from author:
yeah, its just how most of the stories that I write come to me as. I get an idea, then jump to one part, and jump around the timeline, adding details. By the time I've got enough details at the start to do a decent chapter one or two, I've already got enough in places for a chapter ten, thirty five, and so on for even a sequel if I break it down into such segments.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from Greywizard
Review:
Cool.

So to speak. ;-)
Comments from author:
Yeah well, all they needed to turn up the heat was call Buffy. :P
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Comments from author:
Trying to come up with more.
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from Eureka
Review:
DANG!!!Hell froze over?? and Buffy an Xander were there?????
Comments from author:
well, they responded to a call involving it.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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