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Review of chapter "Chapter two" from Netchka
Review:
More please! More please! Really need to read more please! :-)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
I wanna cry! I wish this was updated! I freakin' love this fic.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Awesome
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from Narf
Review:
Nice, Keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from eriktheviking
Review:
An entertaining arrival for Xander and his innate sense of finding damsels in distress that can turn him into a pretzel.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I hope you like the futuer chapters.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from Alexis
Review:
Interesting idea. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. There aren't enough DA/BtVS crossovers out there!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I totally agree that there are too few DA fics here. I hope you like the future chapters.
Review By [Alexis] • Date [4 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from msdarque
Review:
Intriguing and fun chapter. Loved reading it.
Quite eager to read more. Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [4 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from msdarque
Review:
Intriguing... I'd really like to read more. :)
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rod
Review:
It's a bit... OK, it's a lot problematical. Both your tenses and your viewpoint wander hither and yon without much regard to consistency, making this hard work to read. It's also rather short; I know you are only setting the scene here, but you did it with a lump of "telling" that seems to have compressed several months into a paragraph or so. It would have be better to have taken longer and shown us the changes instead. What you've done runs the risk of presenting us with someone we don't recognise as Xander after all the changes he has already been put through, a risk that is magnified by not even calling him Xander any more.
Review By [Rod] • Date [14 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from xon
Review:
*headdesk*

Can't you get this thing PROOFREAD, first?!?
Review By [xon] • Date [14 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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