Review of chapter "Whose coming you should fear." from drdeth
Great story. I would love to see a sequel where Xander turns up.
Comments from author:
Sadly, unlikely at this time. In addition to a new job, schooling, fighting depression, and general life, the inspiratino just hasn't hit me. This appeared almost as is in my mind one night, and stuck till I wrote it out.
Review By [drdeth
] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Whose coming you should fear." from DeaconKrow
Ok, I gotta say. That is a direction I have never seen anyone take. I like it. I hope this turns into something more, but either way very nice. :)
Review By [DeaconKrow
] • Date [1 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whose coming you should fear." from trongod
Very, /very/ nice. I would like to see another chapter where our fearless though still puzzled searcher starts finding out just how bad things can get when his contacts hear him out and totally freak out on him... and get even worse when he mentions the boyfriend's pure white aura and come up with 'The Slayers' White Knight' and disappear on him...
And those eavesdropping immediately panic worse than he's ever seen, and people start coming to him to /help/ him find the girl before /he/ has time to arrive...
Review By [trongod
] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whose coming you should fear." from Orchamus
This would be bloody amazing if you could have him not find her in time, and Xander comes knocking. Seriously, it would be epic.
Review By [Orchamus
] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]