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Review of chapter "Stairway to Heaven" from arturusoriginal
Review:
Very nice take on the crossover - I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this
Review By [arturusoriginal] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stairway to Heaven" from borgrabbit
Review:
Hairway to Steven haiku:

I don't mind the sun
Some will fall in love with life
Images it shows

A rather random ringing rendering of rectal rock as a haiku followed by senseless alliteration.
I am looking forward to more chapters, even if they're a little short.
Be happy,
Ciao
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [6 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Impossible things?" from Oxnate
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Oops! Ha!
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What're we gonna tell your Mama?" from Oxnate
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Pace feels better now.

On the ultimatum: I like how you showed it forcing Giles to reconsider his life-choices up to that point. I think showing Giles' thought process was what made this work. Because I can't remember another ultimatum in fanfiction that worked as well as this one did. Mostly because in real life, ultimatums tend to turn people off, cause them to do more of what you were trying to stop. Simply because people don't like to feel controlled like that.

On the show and tell. I know Normal Again is 'canon' and I love that episode, but it doesn't make sense. This isn't just you, but if Buffy could bend a fire poker into a corkscrew, why and how would she ever be institutionalized? Because you hit the nail on the head, one demonstration would be all it took. Just lift one parent in each hand and viola.

(There are other 'canon' things that can't be canon, but that's the one that comes up most in fanfics.)
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stairway to Heaven" from removedauthor
Review:
Awsome story I hope to read more soon.
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Cause I'm a woman..." from Oxnate
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Halloween actually was on a Friday that year. So either you researched it or got lucky. Kudos for that.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [4 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Learning to live with the Consequences" from Oxnate
Review:
A pumpkin traveling at that kind of speed would have punctured a hole in that plane.

I love where you're going with this story, though I think things are going a bit too quickly. I think I'm still going to love it, just feels rushed.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [4 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stairway to Heaven" from JediKnight
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Very nioce work on the newest chapter you have posted, I hope to read more of this fic soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [4 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Playing Cupid" from Oxnate
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Dear Lord. I just found this and the mere fact that you ACTUALLY UNDERSTAND how the Halloween spell works gives me great hope for this fic. I'm sorry that utter morons ruined the last one. But I'm hoping that you have improved as a writer since then and have a better grasp of where you want the story to go and how to get it there.

The rest of this chapter is better than average YAHF.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [3 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stairway to Heaven" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Thanks for the great update!
Yea they need to start planning now, and get Kendra onside or everything falls apart.

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stairway to Heaven" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
glad to see this. was worried it had made its way to the Isle of Abandoned stories. I still have the image of Xan or Will playing with Travers like he was a dandelion..."Slayer had a watcher and his head popped off."

keep it up
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stairway to Heaven" from AnFan
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With the talk in this chapter, I can see a way to saving Faith's Watcher. And if Diane joins them in Calif. I fear that Giles will become more and more of a minority. Xan will likely also look at the change from Halloween as a positive thing because it means 'He' won't be outnumbered like Giles :)

Thanks for the update.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Power of Gold" from mendal
Review:
Why couldn't willow keep her first name?
Review By [mendal] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stairway to Heaven" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Excellent rundown on why the Old Council has to go and great update to the story. Thank you :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing Cupid" from Batamut
Review:
I am not a fan of Angel but someone has made a good suggestion on why he couldn't give mouth-to-mouth (though CPR works best with more compression than breathing if the ambulance is on the way), since he is a vampire he only has one breath his last one and this is not very good for humans (OK I am paraphrasing the last part)

Any good to see this again I remember like the previous version
Comments from author:
If that were true, then Spike couldn't smoke, and vampires literally could not speak, because both of those actions involve moving air from one place to the other. Vampires do not have to breathe at any time; they can breathe when they want to.

You don't need to be alive to breathe, you simply need to have a working set of lungs and diaphragm.
Review By [Batamut] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Not Rated
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