I hope you some day come back to this fic. It is very good.

Hmm, never read this one, or the previous version of it, before. Nice fic though. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Exciting story! I look forward to more.

Thank you.

You win an early review because Chapter eight totally tickled me with the resolution for Eyghon (sp). Anyhow, that scene with Buffy calling one of her best beloveds and asking them to toss the demon to space had me chortling like mad. Nicely done.

I am now tracking and avidly look forward to more.

What a great story! I love it!

Nice chapter. Very focused and well written. Drama is starting to increase. Good job.

Very nice job on the new chapter, though it did seem a bit too short.

i liked it

I did, too. :)

whoa, heavy.

I keep getting the mental image of X & W taking Travers and the Council bottom lips, pulling them over the top of their heads and making them swallow...
or playing hack-n-sack...
or punting them into low orbit...
anyway keep up the good work and give us more of this soon please.

That was certainly on the minds of Xan and Willa. :D

This should be making BIG changes to Sunnydale, not just the death of Spike and Dru, but in death rates etc. By now surely the Mayor is getting worried, and (if they've already set up in Sunnydale) the Initiative must be VERY interested. I'd expect there to be some attempts to get rid of them, maybe while they're in the Jennifer form.

It's making...some changes. This is just around three weeks from Halloween (just finishing "What's my line?"), and the girls have had to spend a good bit of time getting up to speed on several things, including reading over the Watcher Journals. Death rates are down - a bit, but the various people in the know at this time can't be sure if it's a normal variation or not. One thing to be aware of - nobody's seen the girls change, so they aren't aware of any connection. But as a matter of course, the Mayor's people are aware that the girls moved in with the Summers.

The Initiative, if they're here, are just getting started. They don't have a baseline run yet.

Nice work on the update, hoping to read more soon. Was that Kendra you just introduced?

Yes.

You do have to wonder why most of the super stong heroes don't study some form of martial arts to be more effective.

Because when you can fly on the strength of the farts you squeeze out, getting an extra couple of PSI from your punch doesn't usually make a difference.

Aww, Poor Xandiddums. Did he really expect Principal Snider to do something helpful? Talk about clasping at straws!

Well, he was in a quandary. In Jen Walters' body, without training, he couldn't do anything. So, hell, Snyder might be stoned that day. But the good principal was on form, protecting the football players from the rest of the school. :)

Could see the Judge rumble with the she-hulks. maybe Skip the demon from angel.
Wolfram & Hart had a few characters that would be possible fights.

You could borrow demons or monsters from D&D or greek mythology or norse, I could see frost giants invading.

again keep up the good work as I've re-read this again and still enjoy it.

Well, the Judge is not any kind of a match, nor Skip from angel. One of the she-hulks is an approximate match for Thor.

Perhaps the beast from Angel?

I don't see frost giants invading, as they need each one of them to protect themselves from the Asgard, but perhaps that.

Or perhaps a bittersweet ending.

Most of the chapter was good, but, the fight areas with the Ford and Eygohn episodes could have been elaborarted on a little more I think. Hope to read more soon.

Hope to write more soon. :)