Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Markelo
What about Smoke
Review By [Markelo
] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from noirekitsune
just wanted to say that i LOVE this story!
i think xan's power is totally awesome and unique!
and i love that the soldier and hyena are in play too, i always thought fics with them added in the mix were more interesting ^^
i hope there's more soon!!
Review By [noirekitsune
] • Date [26 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from InsanitySorrow
Considering how vague and mysterious the package is, only one person could it be-Destiny or been known as Irene Adler. Sound interesting and I normally don't read slash. Cannot wait to see where this going. By the way, where X-men setting is this? The movie or the comic?
Review By [InsanitySorrow
] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Netchka
Interesting story. Good start. Really hope you continue soon. My suggestion for a name would be the Atomizer.
Review By [Netchka
] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from pyromaniac
How about something along the lines of Haze, Gloom, Overcast, or Smolder?
Review By [pyromaniac
] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AnnaDruvez
Wow. I'm looking forward to reading more of this.
The technical aspects (grammar, etc.) of the story are above par. I found myself sympathizing with Xander and I genuinely want to know what the next chapter will bring.
Review By [AnnaDruvez
] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from jgoodman
Great chapter, love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman
] • Date [5 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ashez
What about a brand of cigarettes? Like Joe Camel or Marlboro?
Review By [ashez
] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Drupadi
I can't wait to see where you are headed with this. And as for a possible name how about "Vapor" since he did 'vaporize' that vamp.
Review By [Drupadi
] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from RinHitokiri
I am definitely liking this story and as for a mutant name, I would suggest Vapor!
Review By [RinHitokiri
] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Morgomir
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir
] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from xanderfanficlover
The standard Atom would fit, then there's Atomos, Alchemist since he can break down atoms on a molecular level, hadron, quark, element, Zero, Lepton, Nuclear, Carbon, Argon, or Bond.
Review By [xanderfanficlover
] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AkashaDrake
Brimstone, Nucleus, Kamikaze(meaning "Divine Wind")
Whatever you choose, I'd love to see more
Review By [AkashaDrake
] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from falsegod
wow this is certainly a unique way of merging realities
Review By [falsegod
] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from TJG
I just noticed that in a re-read thru that in Chapter 1, the sentinels were first used in L.A. I wonder when, and if no then why not, they will hit all the non-humans that were shown in the Angel series like all the vampires and demons and even demonic bases that also serve as lawyer offices. It could be an impressive magic versus science war going from a shadow war to a hell-fire hot war started by sentinels kicking the hornets nest over.
Looking at some of the other comments, I wonder if Xander is like a cousin of Doctor Manhatten, except instead of seeing time as linear his mind sees everything more as a quantum possibilities. As a bit of speculation, maybe he is like the Ultimate version of Beyonder or a cousin of the Sentry with a more stable insanity/possession (instead of a crazy duality of light and darkness, it is a trinity of man, soldier, and animal).
Edit: other code names: Censored, Redacted. (These are to help screw up any attempts to use information searches on him in the future under his code name).
Review By [TJG
] • Date [2 Feb 12] • Not Rated