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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from rothos
Review:
Sabot

Casing around something usually ammunition.
Nice story, I can think of some people on the other end of the phone.
Nick Fury, Cordellia Chase, Professor X.
Review By [rothos] • Date [10 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Markelo
Review:
What about Smoke
Review By [Markelo] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from noirekitsune
Review:
just wanted to say that i LOVE this story!
i think xan's power is totally awesome and unique!
and i love that the soldier and hyena are in play too, i always thought fics with them added in the mix were more interesting ^^
i hope there's more soon!!

noirekitsune@yahoo.com
Review By [noirekitsune] • Date [26 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from InsanitySorrow
Review:
Considering how vague and mysterious the package is, only one person could it be-Destiny or been known as Irene Adler. Sound interesting and I normally don't read slash. Cannot wait to see where this going. By the way, where X-men setting is this? The movie or the comic?
Review By [InsanitySorrow] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Netchka
Review:
Interesting story. Good start. Really hope you continue soon. My suggestion for a name would be the Atomizer.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from pyromaniac
Review:
How about something along the lines of Haze, Gloom, Overcast, or Smolder?
Review By [pyromaniac] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AnnaDruvez
Review:
Wow. I'm looking forward to reading more of this.

The technical aspects (grammar, etc.) of the story are above par. I found myself sympathizing with Xander and I genuinely want to know what the next chapter will bring.

Well done.
Review By [AnnaDruvez] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from jgoodman
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Great chapter, love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [5 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ashez
Review:
What about a brand of cigarettes? Like Joe Camel or Marlboro?
Review By [ashez] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Drupadi
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I can't wait to see where you are headed with this. And as for a possible name how about "Vapor" since he did 'vaporize' that vamp.
Review By [Drupadi] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from RinHitokiri
Review:
I am definitely liking this story and as for a mutant name, I would suggest Vapor!
Review By [RinHitokiri] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from xanderfanficlover
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The standard Atom would fit, then there's Atomos, Alchemist since he can break down atoms on a molecular level, hadron, quark, element, Zero, Lepton, Nuclear, Carbon, Argon, or Bond.
Review By [xanderfanficlover] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AkashaDrake
Review:
Brimstone, Nucleus, Kamikaze(meaning "Divine Wind")

Whatever you choose, I'd love to see more
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from falsegod
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wow this is certainly a unique way of merging realities
Review By [falsegod] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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