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Hunters Book One: Pale Horses and Prophesy

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Review of chapter "Chapters One through Four" from (Current Donor)AnotherJD
Review:
You repeatedly slip out of present tense into past and then back again. It's disorienting.
Review By [(Current Donor)AnotherJD] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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